My Fall List

“Notice that autumn is more the season of the soul then of nature.” 
                                 Friedrich Nietzsche


I walk along many paths during the fall because it uplifts my soul...here is a list of why I love it so.


The winding bronze path that beckons to me
A refreshing deep breath of chilled autumn air
A tree brilliant yellow against cobalt blue sky
The caw of a scolding crow
The reflection of leaf and sky in rain puddles
A kaleidoscope carpet of leaves on the ground
A cluster of white mushrooms against gold mulch
The sun bright upon tree branches
A soft whispering breeze gentle on my cheeks
The smell of lush rich earth
The muted quiet of sound dampened down
A green and yellow moss carpet on a tree trunk
Red berries against a patch of leafy lime green
A streams lazy swirl reflecting falls canopy of colors
The scampering chatter of a squirrel overhead
A tall white aspen grove
A dog’s exuberant bark at the waters edge
The soft sound of water trickling past
You walking by my side


written 9-16-2019
Fall Into Fall Poetry Contest  1st place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Delaney Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 12:46 PM
The wonder of Fall...my favorite season. Loved reading your list. So nice to meet you and thanks for your visit to my poems today. SuZ
Romios Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 12:50 PM
Best to you..excellent PR
Crismond  Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 9:04 AM
What a beautiful colorful poem. That's what I love about fall all the vibrant colors. Congratulations on your win:)
Mcgee Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 9:16 AM
Thank you for stopping by for a read Heather.
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:52 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Jeanne, congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem.
Wolf Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 8:17 PM
Wonderful list, every one conjuring up snapshots of Fall's brilliance and wonder. Congrats on your win in the contest, Jeanne. Cheers, Gershon
Chiri Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:30 AM
Jeanne congratulations on your win!;)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 12:26 AM
I faved this. It is extraordinary and I love it so... Congratulations and bless you
Adams Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 4:03 PM
you make the beauty of fall come to life quite beautifully in this poem...well penned, good luck in the contest my friend :) hugs
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