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“Notice that autumn is more the season of the soul then of nature.” Friedrich Nietzsche I walk along many paths during the fall because it uplifts my soul...here is a list of why I love it so. The winding bronze path that beckons to me A refreshing deep breath of chilled autumn air A tree brilliant yellow against cobalt blue sky The caw of a scolding crow The reflection of leaf and sky in rain puddles A kaleidoscope carpet of leaves on the ground A cluster of white mushrooms against gold mulch The sun bright upon tree branches A soft whispering breeze gentle on my cheeks The smell of lush rich earth The muted quiet of sound dampened down A green and yellow moss carpet on a tree trunk Red berries against a patch of leafy lime green A streams lazy swirl reflecting falls canopy of colors The scampering chatter of a squirrel overhead A tall white aspen grove A dog’s exuberant bark at the waters edge The soft sound of water trickling past You walking by my side written 9-16-2019 Fall Into Fall Poetry Contest 1st place

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Date: 5/24/2020 12:46:00 PM
The wonder of Fall...my favorite season. Loved reading your list. So nice to meet you and thanks for your visit to my poems today. SuZ
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Date: 9/26/2019 12:50:00 PM
Best to you..excellent PR
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Date: 9/25/2019 9:04:00 AM
What a beautiful colorful poem. That's what I love about fall all the vibrant colors. Congratulations on your win:)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/7/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by for a read Heather.
Date: 9/24/2019 12:52:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 10:37:00 AM
Jeanne, congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem.
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Date: 9/23/2019 8:17:00 PM
Wonderful list, every one conjuring up snapshots of Fall's brilliance and wonder. Congrats on your win in the contest, Jeanne. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 9/23/2019 1:30:00 AM
Jeanne congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 9/23/2019 12:26:00 AM
I faved this. It is extraordinary and I love it so... Congratulations and bless you
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Date: 9/18/2019 4:03:00 PM
you make the beauty of fall come to life quite beautifully in this poem...well penned, good luck in the contest my friend :) hugs
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