My Faith Crumbled

My faith so strong
        crumbled until completely gone
               when my precious child's seizures came along.
My faith had all been drawn
        in the two year nightmare no prescription controlled.
 My prayers searched for answers God seemed to withhold.
 One night, I cursed God, I raged bold;
        next, all seizures stopped as God proved 
               His love never stopped.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/23/2019 1:52:00 PM
Such an honest brilliantly penning CayCay, a fine word of testimony that God hadn't forgotten you but came in for you. Have a blessed day!
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Date: 7/2/2019 7:38:00 PM
Very well-done, and so glad that your faith was restored. Sometimes just after we give up hope, that's when salvation is sent. Congrats on your win. Best wishes, gw
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Date: 7/2/2019 2:51:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS - i got so caught up in your write - you deserved this win. J.
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Date: 7/2/2019 2:50:00 PM
This is too intense for words - God shows his presence always at our lowest ebb in life - a strong, powerful write which I love CayCay. Love you dear friend. Hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 7/1/2019 8:59:00 AM
A beautifully expressive poem that poignantly conveys your emotional pain. Congratulations on your win CayCay. My girls are out of school so I haven't had much time for poetry. I hope you are well. xxoo : )
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Date: 6/30/2019 6:06:00 PM
CayCatly congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful and emotional write and sorry for my delay in visiting ~
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Date: 6/30/2019 5:47:00 PM
A mother's love can move mountains CayCay i had tears reading your touching poem, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2019 8:31:00 PM
Your talented pen stirs moving emotions in your poignant and intimate poem, CayCay. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always my dear friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/25/2019 4:28:00 PM
A poignant poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/25/2019 11:53:00 AM
wow, this is so authentic, Caycay. You are an amazing mother AND friend. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/22/2019 4:13:00 AM
Many people go through that experience and worst.. Well done...
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Date: 6/21/2019 10:02:00 AM
Nicely penned, CayCay, I think sometimes God tests our faith this way. Many fail but we learn a lesson as we look back and know that we must not let our faith waiver. Best of luck in the contest my friend. John
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Date: 6/21/2019 8:48:00 AM
Wow! Powerful penning. My best to you in the contest, xomo
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Date: 6/21/2019 12:19:00 AM
Faith- a lesson of inside as well as insight; yeah, right you are that God love-proved the rage wrong!/// beautiful poem
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