My Faith

Sunlit Oak Forest by Kevin Hill



When I lose my footing, my faith returns when he is near me. 
For, I belong to him and he to me. This is the way God created 
us to be. If he fell from the edge of winter, I would warm him 
in my embrace. If he stumbled below a crescendo of clouds 
clashing, I would comfort him until my words drifted off in 
exhausted sleep.  If a full eclipse echoed darkness in his soul, 
I would be the light to guide him home, and I know he would 
be the same for me. I love the totality of him – the beauty 
and the darkness, weakness and strength. I would rather walk 
through a fading forest with him on treacherous earth of 
greenbrier and bramble than a smooth, picturesque path 
through evergreens alone. If his hand is holding mine, I am 
warm inside and more in love with him in every season of 
our journey. A heavy sky of gray and drizzling rain feels like 
a sunny day when he smiles at me. This is the life intended for us. 
My faith in God has never wavered, but it deepened when 
He gave me a lasting love.             


feet circle through dense woodland - 
I reach for your hand
and find my way back home 

7/15/20
Contest – My Faith
Sponsor – Regina Riddle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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McBride  Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Amen, love this
Goldsmith Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 8:41 AM
This is a "Beautiful" write and picture. I am walking down your path. Love It. Love your first line, "When I lose my footing, my faith returns when he is near me." So true. Enjoy your day with blessings.................
Meade Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 11:39 AM
I hope you are well. Write more!
Watt Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 2:17 PM
I love the painting of the path being lit by the sun as it winds through the forest - an allegory of life perhaps? Also love your words and how they poetically express the faith in God that lights our way and picks us up when we fall, as well as giving us a hope in eternity that drives us forward. Beautiful expression, Rhonda!
Romios Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 11:20 AM
CONGRATULATIONS Rhonda! What a overwhelming penned verse, Panagiota xx
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 2:18 AM
This is another fave for me Rhonda. I always know I am in for an enchanting experience whenever I visit a muse of yours. This one captivates my senses again. Congratulations on your win :) Much love!
Carmack Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 7:14 PM
Nicely done Rhonda. Congrats and God Bless you.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Congrats and you definitely a WINNER with this beauty. I LOVE it. It's a tremendously expressive and impressive writing that I truly adore. God bless you with many more beautiful writes. Poetry hugs, Gina
Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 3:24 AM
"never wavered" - this is really saying something; amazing faith my friend. Wow! Fine job.
Leffanta Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 1:49 PM
You weave a beautiful tapestry! Aloha! Rico
Hamilton Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 1:05 PM
This is a special write Rhonda, so glad you posted this, something we can strive for to write like this, if for the contest a sure winner!
Wolf Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 10:53 PM
So expressive, the image of reaching for God's hand. Superb haibun, Rhonda! Blessings, Gershon
Parker Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 7:03 PM
you know very few people can write passion filled poetry, that cannot be learned you are born with it my poetic friend...I'm fav this one
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