My Eyes

my eyes are so dark and the sun in my sky dead So my soul is blind but tomorrow a morn star shall take a way the night

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/25/2011 6:09:00 PM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Constance, Honesty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2011 9:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Honesty, in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/24/2011 4:53:00 PM

this is so beautiful...so very beautiful. congrats on your win. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2011 7:01:00 AM

Congrats HONESTY my friend on your great big win in the Japanese contest luv.. a super cool write.. enjoy with luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/24/2011 12:45:00 AM

soulful write, honesty.. CONGRATS to you :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2011 9:45:00 PM

wow, I am glad you won so that I was able to know you had this poem here. Congratulations. I really like this!

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 2/23/2011 9:07:00 PM

Many congrats Honesty on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/23/2011 1:22:00 PM

I could really see this being a lovers reply of grief and hope for tomorow. Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

Kash Poet

Date: 2/23/2011 10:33:00 AM

Emotional write here,Honesty.Congrats on your big win!---kashinath

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/21/2011 9:51:00 AM

Hi there my friend thanks for the entry, I could see how a lover could reply this to a haiku..showing that they are longing and missing the other and waiting to see them again...please join the 5 lines no space please/ no indent..title ---my eyes are so dark..Light & Love

De R

Date: 11/11/2010 12:39:00 AM

A heartfelt poem, Honesty:) Hugs, Emilia

Cecil Hickman

Date: 11/9/2010 4:15:00 PM

a very deep emotional piece with well chosen words,,Blessings..Cecil

Vicki Acquah

Date: 11/9/2010 12:58:00 PM

Is experimenting a bad thing ?did you like it was it funny.comment? This one I like,because it it explains a rather dead comment. But according to you there is hope. Sometime moving outside of the box stirs the soul.

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/9/2010 5:44:00 AM

very optimistic powerful write,honesty.i enjoyed it.

Chad Wood

Date: 11/8/2010 10:22:00 AM

Good imagery in this one :) and THANK you for checking my work out!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/8/2010 9:47:00 AM

Nice write with fine images, Honesty

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/8/2010 9:36:00 AM

Truly well written, leaving the reader thinking and also with hope. That's excellent! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comment on my latest. Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2010 9:02:00 AM

They say dawn always follows the darkest nights, Honesty. You have great vision -- no blindness in your sweet soul. A beautiful tanka! Love, Carolyn