My Eyes

I am alone.
I fight everything off
after I push it all away
I watch it play
Like a bad movie at the end of the day
I shaped it out of clay
and like a father watching his son play
I want to find a way
to be there every day
but I see that I can't
I'm just a washed-up man
like sand, the tide will redeliver me
maybe then I'll be free
or maybe I'll get locked up
and they'll throw away the key
I wish I could, and I know
nothing in this world is set in stone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/20/2010 9:54:00 PM
wow !!!!!!! wow!!!!! I am so sorry.reading this brought back memories your not alone ..because i am here and i see you ,there if u need someone to talk to, or if you just want to let go of somethings, i am here to listen as a friend and a fellow classmate. i personaly think you would've have been a better choice for me .
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:24:00 PM
wow danny what an amazing poem i look forwar to reading more..
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Date: 3/6/2010 12:35:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Danny. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/5/2010 8:02:00 PM
An interesting write Danny and your lines keep the reader thinking all the way through.. enjoyed..luv.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/5/2010 6:09:00 PM
wow, good job
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Date: 3/5/2010 5:40:00 PM
That is correct nothing is set in stone and wanting to change then say I will change...Look for resources to help make the change and you are on your way...Or was this just a topic....Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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