My Eyes

I am alone. I fight everything off after I push it all away I watch it play Like a bad movie at the end of the day I shaped it out of clay and like a father watching his son play I want to find a way to be there every day but I see that I can't I'm just a washed-up man like sand, the tide will redeliver me maybe then I'll be free or maybe I'll get locked up and they'll throw away the key I wish I could, and I know nothing in this world is set in stone

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Darshae Carley

Date: 3/20/2010 9:54:00 PM

wow !!!!!!! wow!!!!! I am so sorry.reading this brought back memories your not alone ..because i am here and i see you ,there if u need someone to talk to, or if you just want to let go of somethings, i am here to listen as a friend and a fellow classmate. i personaly think you would've have been a better choice for me .

Darshae Carley

Date: 3/8/2010 6:24:00 PM

wow danny what an amazing poem i look forwar to reading more..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/6/2010 12:35:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Danny. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/5/2010 8:02:00 PM

An interesting write Danny and your lines keep the reader thinking all the way through.. enjoyed..luv.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...Linda-Marie..

Troy Jeremy Nelson

Date: 3/5/2010 6:09:00 PM

wow, good job

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2010 5:40:00 PM

That is correct nothing is set in stone and wanting to change then say I will change...Look for resources to help make the change and you are on your way...Or was this just a topic....Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara