My Exhausted Faculties

It’s been a long day My exhausted faculties Gone, they fall apart I desire to finally Be alone, fall on a couch And my computer Is near, ready for input There for my comfort For poetry is my heart And soul of true relaxing
Russell Sivey Entrant into yasmin khan's "Letting your hair down" contest 6/14/2012
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Williams Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 11:38 AM
Russell congrats on your win,,good way of relaxing..David
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 2:48 PM
Russell, this is a GEM. I can't believe I had never even seen it yet. I really love how you chose to do yours, short and sweet!! Congrast.
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Russell. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:07 AM
I think this is why the Soup helps many of us relax and restore our spirits! Congrats on your win, Russell!!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 8:16 AM
congrats Russell on a wonderful winning write .. another top notch entry luv.. believe poetry soothes all our souls to relaxation..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:38 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Russell xx
Song Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 8:14 PM
Whoa is the life of an MBA student! I am so proud of u and your quest....may your family shower u with all that's wonderful tomorrow...Glad u liked my version of footsies as u called it! It really is about my second chance of love after a very painful first attempt. 13 yrs the first....8 yrs almost with the real " man of my dreams." Bless u and your marriage, Russell. Guard that ring finger as your winning poem demonstrates you'll do!
Harrington Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 2:55 PM
Wonderful tanka Russell.. And what a way to relax! alone, yet not alone with a whole host of online friends and supporters! Good luck in the contest...Tanya
Onclaud Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 8:09 PM
that's the way to chill and relax, russell... again, you marked this piece with easy feeel.. wow.. :) huggs!
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