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My Exhausted Faculties

It’s been a long day My exhausted faculties Gone, they fall apart I desire to finally Be alone, fall on a couch And my computer Is near, ready for input There for my comfort For poetry is my heart And soul of true relaxing Russell Sivey Entrant into yasmin khan's "Letting your hair down" contest 6/14/2012

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David Williams

Date: 6/29/2012 11:38:00 AM

Russell congrats on your win,,good way of relaxing..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2012 2:48:00 PM

Russell, this is a GEM. I can't believe I had never even seen it yet. I really love how you chose to do yours, short and sweet!! Congrast.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2012 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Russell. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/27/2012 9:07:00 AM

I think this is why the Soup helps many of us relax and restore our spirits! Congrats on your win, Russell!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2012 8:16:00 AM

congrats Russell on a wonderful winning write .. another top notch entry luv.. believe poetry soothes all our souls to relaxation..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/27/2012 1:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning spot Russell xx

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/16/2012 8:14:00 PM

Whoa is the life of an MBA student! I am so proud of u and your quest....may your family shower u with all that's wonderful tomorrow...Glad u liked my version of footsies as u called it! It really is about my second chance of love after a very painful first attempt. 13 yrs the first....8 yrs almost with the real " man of my dreams." Bless u and your marriage, Russell. Guard that ring finger as your winning poem demonstrates you'll do!

Tanya Harrington

Date: 6/15/2012 2:55:00 PM

Wonderful tanka Russell.. And what a way to relax! alone, yet not alone with a whole host of online friends and supporters! Good luck in the contest...Tanya

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/14/2012 8:09:00 PM

that's the way to chill and relax, russell... again, you marked this piece with easy feeel.. wow.. :) huggs!