My Every

You are my every heartbeat, including those that skip and leap. You are my every breath, including those you take and keep. Repost 7/21/11 For Brian Strand's contest 'Aspects of Love' 1st place

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/25/2011 7:07:00 PM

Congrats on 1st Place, Emma. Nice going. luv Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/25/2011 2:54:00 PM

Congrats Emma on your first place win with this elegant poetry luv.. Brian did a blog on the issues he is having judging his current contest as his Iphone is not compatible with upgrades on PS now..oh..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/23/2011 10:09:00 PM

I guess it wasn't necessary Emma. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 7/23/2011 9:34:00 PM

cool quatrian, Emma. Congrats to you.! You wrote what came... no suggestions needed.. : )

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/22/2011 10:26:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Emma. Nice going. xxxRalph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2011 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Emma. Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/22/2011 4:11:00 AM

This stands perfectly as it is, in my view. It is simple and yet profound. A lovely, poetic little write! Best of luck in the contest! Love, Robert.

Steven Cooke

Date: 7/22/2011 1:18:00 AM

so romantic, makes you glad to be alive. beautiful

David Williams

Date: 7/21/2011 11:33:00 AM

hey em, soup....