Emma Mantle Poet Quatrain

My Every

You are my every heartbeat,
  including those that skip and leap.
You are my every breath,
  including those you take and keep.


Repost 7/21/11
For Brian Strand's contest 'Aspects of Love'
1st place

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Ralph Taylor July 25, 2011 at 7:07 PM Congrats on 1st Place, Emma. Nice going. luv Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 25, 2011 at 2:54 PM Congrats Emma on your first place win with this elegant poetry luv.. Brian did a blog on the issues he is having judging his current contest as his Iphone is not compatible with upgrades on PS now..oh..

Joyce Johnson July 23, 2011 at 10:09 PM I guess it wasn't necessary Emma. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Robert A. Dufresne July 23, 2011 at 9:34 PM cool quatrian, Emma. Congrats to you.! You wrote what came... no suggestions needed.. : )

Ralph Taylor July 22, 2011 at 10:26 AM Congrats on your win, Emma. Nice going. xxxRalph

Carol Sunshine Brown July 22, 2011 at 9:55 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian Strand's contest "Aspects Of Love" contest Emma. Love, Carol

Zzzzz Zzzzz July 22, 2011 at 4:11 AM This stands perfectly as it is, in my view. It is simple and yet profound. A lovely, poetic little write! Best of luck in the contest! Love, Robert.

Steven Cooke July 22, 2011 at 1:18 AM so romantic, makes you glad to be alive. beautiful

David Williams July 21, 2011 at 11:33 AM hey em, soup....