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Words by: Arthur Vaso Excerpt from his poem entitled: She Red, the vibrancy of the rose, hidden. The little garden smiles after the rain, filled and full of compassion she is my sanity in a world that has gone insane. She is my sunrise when sunsets are only,.. Flames !
***** A beautiful sunset flames the horizon but all I do is think of her the way her fairy red hair glows in an evening's flaxen copper light The water feels calm and the trees rest easily upon this peaceful earth but all I want to do is run my fingers through her curls when she smiles ! She sits on a wicker bench, a red rose posed in beauteous charm scented softly like the gardenias that surround my happy garden lost in the petrichor that arises after a long awaited rainfall all I need is to be close to her, closer than the breath of her skin With a touch barely there the sun rises upon her ivory shoulder the Flames I've known yesterday can never compare to this gentle Rose who speaks only the language of love to me She is sunrise and sunset,... my everlasting Flame! By: Mystic Rose

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Date: 6/9/2025 11:24:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Love it.
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Date: 6/9/2025 2:59:00 PM
Thanks you for reading and leaving a comment dear Jay :)
Date: 6/9/2025 9:21:00 AM
You have never lost your ability to write such wonderful poem. So full of imagery and beautiful words.
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Date: 6/9/2025 2:58:00 PM
Thank you for always appreciating my poetry Victor, I really treasure each comment you leave
Date: 6/9/2025 1:33:00 AM
"She is sunrise and sunset,... my everlasting Flame!" -- Our very special Rose! Soup is blessed!
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Date: 6/9/2025 2:58:00 PM
Thank you for always making me feel so very special Joe, yesterday I received news that my short story " Sail Along Silvery Moon " has received honorary mention, what a delight that was, just wanted to share my good news.
Date: 6/9/2025 12:37:00 AM
So beautiful , loved this Hugs!
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Date: 6/9/2025 2:57:00 PM
I believe you inspired this in me, Arthur, so thankyou for sharing your talented pen

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