My Eternal Winter

A mirror doesnt always reflect what we see.
The scars of mistakes invisable to all.
None may understand but me.

The sound of the of regrets  whisper low and soft
into my ear.
A constant reminder your no longer here.

A closet filled with his  sent ii cannot release.
As he did part from this life.
There is no such thing as rest and peace.

Green were the fields when spring knew 
love.
Empty and  are the nights.
Cloudy and gray as the sky above.


Standing alone  is that old tree.
Eternal is my winter.
For nothing is left inside of me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 6:01 AM
Sad poem Susan, well written if i may say so>>James
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 2:23 PM
Susan, welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 5:39 PM
Lovely and sad.. I hope that your eternity is not winter..as they say..this to shall pass. Not easily..but given time there is hopel BG
Knox Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 3:08 PM
sad but beautiful , well done :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 12:13 PM
Very descriptive Rhyme and very poetic. Keep writing. Sara
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