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My Eternal Grief

In sullen silence darkness looms my thoughts writhe with your absence. My eternal grief. A maze existence till heartens soul rots, ill vex incumbrance. Longing your essence, lumbering time jots muffle remembrance. My eternal grief. 2/13/2019 Poetry Contest: Writing Challenge, Feb 2019, Roundel Form Sponsored by: Dear Heart incumbrance https://www.vocabulary.com/dictionary/incumbrance any obstruction that impedes or is burdensome

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Constance La France

Date: 3/6/2019 5:56:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Roundel~

L. J. Carber

Date: 2/17/2019 12:25:00 PM

This poem is almost overwhelming in its power-- because it testifies to the depth of your grief:if grief is a tax we pay for love, then the greater the love, the higher the tax. But your grief will not be 'eternal', Eve-- as proof, I offer the last words my mother spoke to me as she lay dying: I told her I loved her, and she said, 'I know-- love never goes away.' We lose people only in this ephemeral life, not in eternity, where they await us. Oh, and congrats on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/17/2019 12:25:00 PM

A lovely, yet sad Roundel, Eve. People who talk from experience know the true meaning of 'grief'. Regards & Hugs // paul

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 2/15/2019 6:56:00 PM

The line, 'a maze existence'... that is exactly how it is for me, sometimes. God Bless You! Grief is like a sharp nail against a fingertip, except the point eventually gets duller.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/14/2019 1:41:00 PM

Well written Eve. I can feel it and understand this . Happy Valentines Day :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/14/2019 9:06:00 AM

Painfully sad but penned extremely well. Good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2019 7:33:00 AM

aww Eve my heart goes out to you my friend, a poignant piece indeed hugs jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 2/14/2019 8:41:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/14/2019 5:20:00 AM

Or loving memories redefining your pain...Happy Valentine Eve...I know someone out there is loving you more... All the best...

Eve Roper
Date: 2/14/2019 8:41:00 AM

Thank you, Arturo, my Lord holds me close. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*

Bobby May

Date: 2/14/2019 5:11:00 AM

My heart goes out to you my friend! you have already won this contest!

Eve Roper
Date: 2/14/2019 8:40:00 AM

Thank you, Bobby, for your kind words and confidence. Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/14/2019 3:10:00 AM

A well written verse Eve, grief is such a difficult thing to cope with in our lives . Hope you are we'll. Tom.

Eve Roper
Date: 2/14/2019 8:38:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. I am doing well, but there are times ..... Happy Valentine's Day Hugs Eve ~`*

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/13/2019 11:39:00 PM

Eve, why I am up at this weird hour I will never understand. Why you are up at this hour I now fully understand. I think this is a darling roundel, and you have built it well. Good luck in the contest my friend. This part is profoundly poetic: "A maze existence till heartens soul rots, ill vex incumbrance."

Eve Roper
Date: 2/14/2019 12:02:00 AM

Thank you for your wonderful inspiring compliment, Caren. You are always so very generous with your comments and presence. I have always been a night owl and now it's even harder to sleep. Have a wonderful Valentine's Day with everyone remembering you. Hugs sweet lady