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The pin holes of night Crickets sing the mountain’s song The stream’s gentle hush

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/27/2018 3:01:00 AM
The pinholes of night. I had never thought of it as such, but it is SO right! The entire poem is nicely done! Kudos!
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Byron Kaya
Date: 9/28/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Caren!
Date: 9/8/2018 11:03:00 AM
Simply gorgeous. The imagery and spirit of your haiku is amazing and reflects a sense of freedom, beauty and joy, Byron. Warmest wishes .. ~Susan
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Byron Kaya
Date: 9/9/2018 2:36:00 PM
Thank you Susan! :)
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Byron Kaya
Date: 9/9/2018 2:36:00 PM
Thank you Susan! :)

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