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My Empty Apartment

Come back dear, my empty apartment longs for you with its door wide open; bring with you those candles of love and light up every corner of it, drive the frigidity away with your warm smile, bring some rain, a handful of sunshine and few poetry; paint the rooms with the rain so that you can drench in it whenever the heat of life touches you, let the sunshine glow whenever you need to keep the pain away, and decorate it with your beloved poetry so that you can talk, listen to them every now and then. Come back dear into my heart my empty apartment! ==================== Contest: Empty Apartment By:kashinath karmakar(11th Dec.2010)

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Date: 8/8/2012 2:29:00 PM
Do you remember I faved this one too? My gosh, I have ten pages of fave poems. HOw many do you have?
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Date: 7/8/2012 4:29:00 PM
kash, congratulations with your featured poem of the week.. hope you are enjoying yours~Always ;-) PD
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Date: 12/17/2010 4:45:00 PM
I just LOVE this one!!! (small suggestion, line 13 say "some" poetry or "a few poems" I don't know if this won the contest or not, but it goes to FAVES for me. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/14/2010 11:46:00 AM
Enjoyed this emotional and creative write Kashinath and wish u much success in Matt's contest... I see my previious comment has posted from yesterday ..how lovely ...here is another my friend..with luv..
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:56:00 PM
Excellent Kashinath .. a grand entry for the contest for Matt.. full of expressive lines of longing from the view of the empty apartment.. entertains the reader till last line..good luck with luv.. appreciate3 your warm and welcome comments on my contest entries with luv..
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:55:00 PM
Excellent Kashinath .. a grand entry full of expression and longing for the contest for Matt... good luck with luv .. an entertaining write ... leaving quite an impression on the reader .. appreciate your wonderful comments on my contest entries today with luv.
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Date: 12/12/2010 9:13:00 PM
Well described about your empty apartment one really feels all that when you are left alone in an apartment....sunkan
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:20:00 AM
Thanks for your reply on Kanhapatra
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:24:00 AM
Great write and entry for contest... nice flow..
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:20:00 AM
Nice metaphor you have used for the feelings of love of the empty heart, Kashinath. If you are from Maharashtra or neighoring state, please my myth on Kanhapatra and let me know if you can add some more information,
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Date: 12/12/2010 2:37:00 AM
the pinings of love so well executed in this respendant work, kashinath.. all the best in the contest! warmest, nette
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Date: 12/11/2010 11:47:00 PM
I liked your take on the challenge, Kashinath-- your lines about the rain painting the room was really beautiful :) hoping that your empty apartment won't be empty anymore-- nice work! -- nikko :)
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