My Emotional Geography

Why should I let you know my emotional geography? Where does that valley of pain lie surrounded by the foggy mountains of unwinged desires? From where those tearful rivers start their journey meeting at the ocean of sorrow? How in a gloomy evening the veil of twilight weeps over its own reflection below? And some melancholy engulfs me whispering in my ear a sorrowful melody? Tell me,why should I? © 2011 ==================================
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Date: 6/6/2013 8:39:00 PM
Kash, a nice little win.... congratulations! *Linda
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Date: 6/6/2013 6:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win... I enjoyed your entry.... let's keep in touch.... Jake
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:35:00 PM
Kash, your entry was one of the most poetically written. Just gorgeous. Congrats AGAIN. It's so nice to see you on more than one winner list with me this night.
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Date: 6/5/2013 2:24:00 PM
I loved your "emotional geography"..congrats on your placement in my contest. Your a lovely poet Kash. BG
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Date: 8/8/2012 2:37:00 PM
I love your melancholy ones and romantic ones. TEll me, have you used any of the poems I faved in any of the INternational soup contests? I probably had faved a few more of yours but I need to get going. Thanks for reviewing my faves again, Kash.
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Date: 3/2/2012 9:57:00 PM
KASH..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 1/9/2012 9:50:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS. And you know what I am noticing? I think these poems I have seen before are losing some of their comments. I am sure I commented to this earlier, much earlier. It's a stunner!
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations Kash on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:37:00 AM
Interesting poem. So much to question. Enjoyed reading this. Congratulations on placement in the contest.
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:41:00 AM
Congratulation on your win with placement. Thanks, bl
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any Top Twenty" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Olajide's contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:12:00 AM
A belated congratulations Kashinath on your win in Brian Strand's "One Off" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:18:00 AM
loved this and have so felt this way, why do we bleed for the entertainment? I have a few poems on the topic too! Congrad's Light & Love [to my fav's]7
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Date: 6/17/2011 9:50:00 PM
I'm so glad you entered this one, which you know is a favorite of mine. WAY to GO. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/17/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congrats Kashinath on your first place win in this contest my friend..with another excellent entry .. this time we are all first placers and so honored to be sharing with u luv..
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:15:00 AM
sunny congrats on your top win in brian's "off , one" , dearie. we are all no.1 here in the contest! :) huggs
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Date: 5/10/2011 12:05:00 PM
A very good write. Lyrical and poetic! Well done my friend!
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Date: 5/6/2011 10:55:00 AM
The title of your poem is so enticing and choice of words is very strong. Filled with open-ended questions and geographical words, this is excellent. Much enjoyed. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/2/2011 1:38:00 AM
Hey again Kash, wrt that write of mine.. A stranger I walked passed asked me for a hug and then I looked at his arms and figured : "why not?" lol crazy me hugged the guy, my niece actually thought I knew the guy lol Told ya I am insane at times.. ;)
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Date: 5/2/2011 1:05:00 AM
Very thought provoking write, Kashinath and you've mapped it out quite well here, liked the metaphors you use here too very cool how you wrote it yet also very deep!
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Date: 5/2/2011 12:03:00 AM
Hey Kash, I think it is Gandhi if I am not mistaken.. How are you doing? ;)
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Date: 5/1/2011 9:35:00 PM
Dear Kash, thanks for your kind comments. I've been sick and have not been online much. I hope to catch up with everyone when I'm better. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/1/2011 9:33:00 PM
HI, Kash , thanks for reading and commenting to my poems today. Now I will go check out the new poet you just told me about.
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Date: 5/1/2011 10:45:00 AM
Kash, quite an emotion filled write you have here.. hmmm I am still wondering what you think makes me unique lol, hope your weekend's been good :)
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