Kash Poet Poet Free verse

My Emotional Geography

Why should I let you know 
my emotional geography?

Where does that valley of pain lie surrounded by
the foggy mountains of unwinged desires?

From where those tearful rivers start their journey
meeting at the ocean of sorrow? 


How in a gloomy evening the veil of twilight 
weeps over its own reflection below? 


And some melancholy engulfs me whispering 
in my ear a sorrowful melody?

Tell me,why should I?




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Poet Destroyer A June 6, 2013 at 8:39 PM Kash, a nice little win.... congratulations! *Linda

John Posey June 6, 2013 at 6:20 PM Congrats on your win... I enjoyed your entry.... let's keep in touch.... Jake

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2013 at 8:35 PM Kash, your entry was one of the most poetically written. Just gorgeous. Congrats AGAIN. It's so nice to see you on more than one winner list with me this night.

Barbara Gorelick June 5, 2013 at 2:24 PM I loved your "emotional geography"..congrats on your placement in my contest. Your a lovely poet Kash. BG

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2012 at 2:37 PM I love your melancholy ones and romantic ones. TEll me, have you used any of the poems I faved in any of the INternational soup contests? I probably had faved a few more of yours but I need to get going. Thanks for reviewing my faves again, Kash.

Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2012 at 9:57 PM KASH..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2012 at 9:50 PM CONGRATULATIONS. And you know what I am noticing? I think these poems I have seen before are losing some of their comments. I am sure I commented to this earlier, much earlier. It's a stunner!

Jon Arno January 6, 2012 at 9:45 AM Congratulations Kash on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon

Debra Squyres January 6, 2012 at 9:37 AM Interesting poem. So much to question. Enjoyed reading this. Congratulations on placement in the contest.

Bl Devnath January 6, 2012 at 8:41 AM Congratulation on your win with placement. Thanks, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown January 6, 2012 at 7:26 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any Top Twenty" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown December 15, 2011 at 11:00 AM Congratulations on your super placement in Olajide's contest Kash. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2011 at 5:12 AM A belated congratulations Kashinath on your win in Brian Strand's "One Off" contest. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi June 18, 2011 at 6:18 AM loved this and have so felt this way, why do we bleed for the entertainment? I have a few poems on the topic too! Congrad's Light & Love [to my fav's]7

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2011 at 9:50 PM I'm so glad you entered this one, which you know is a favorite of mine. WAY to GO. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 17, 2011 at 6:21 AM Congrats Kashinath on your first place win in this contest my friend..with another excellent entry .. this time we are all first placers and so honored to be sharing with u luv..

Nette Onclaud June 17, 2011 at 12:15 AM sunny congrats on your top win in brian's "off , one" , dearie. we are all no.1 here in the contest! :) huggs

Zzzzz Zzzzz May 10, 2011 at 12:05 PM A very good write. Lyrical and poetic! Well done my friend!

Gwendolen Song May 6, 2011 at 10:55 AM The title of your poem is so enticing and choice of words is very strong. Filled with open-ended questions and geographical words, this is excellent. Much enjoyed. Gwendolen

Wilma Neels May 2, 2011 at 1:38 AM Hey again Kash, wrt that write of mine.. A stranger I walked passed asked me for a hug and then I looked at his arms and figured : "why not?" lol crazy me hugged the guy, my niece actually thought I knew the guy lol Told ya I am insane at times.. ;)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 2, 2011 at 1:05 AM Very thought provoking write, Kashinath and you've mapped it out quite well here, liked the metaphors you use here too very cool how you wrote it yet also very deep!

Wilma Neels May 2, 2011 at 12:03 AM Hey Kash, I think it is Gandhi if I am not mistaken.. How are you doing? ;)

Carolyn Devonshire May 1, 2011 at 9:35 PM Dear Kash, thanks for your kind comments. I've been sick and have not been online much. I hope to catch up with everyone when I'm better. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich May 1, 2011 at 9:33 PM HI, Kash , thanks for reading and commenting to my poems today. Now I will go check out the new poet you just told me about.

Wilma Neels May 1, 2011 at 10:45 AM Kash, quite an emotion filled write you have here.. hmmm I am still wondering what you think makes me unique lol, hope your weekend's been good :)

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