My Earliest Memory

I think I was about two three,
 cause I remember sitting on my father's knee.
We were traveling down and old dirt road,
 now bear with me as my story will unfold.
Things I saw my do I tought were not true,
 he could crawl up a corner and look down on you.
At school he was the feature attraction,
 I never really got any of the satisfaction.
He had blocks burst on his chest,
 we only knew his act was the best.
When I found out that it was him,
 I said no wonder he named me Jim.
I veer off to tell you this true fact,
 he put me behind the wheel to see how I act.
As my fathers son I came thru,
 not really knowing what to do.
Yet at the speed of eighty,
 I held the car steady.
He must hae had great faith in me,
 why I can not begin to see.
This memory has stayed in my mind,
 and I tremble at the thought every time.
But I found pleasure in the return trip,
 cause when we finished he gave me a sip.
Don't get me wrong cause I was scared,
 it was overcame by that moment of love we shared.

T.W.I.S.T.
JLM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/20/2009 6:47:00 PM
Such a nice memory of your Dad just as Father's Day approaches. I can see the two of you driving down the country road. He must have been a great influence on your life. I lost my Dad this year and have been thinking (and writing) about him all day. It will be tough not to talk to him on Father's Day. Thank you for sharing this lovely story, Jimmy Lee. Love, Carolyn
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