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My Drum

dancing to the beat of wings my heart a boundless aviary ***

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 4/16/2018 12:56:00 AM

LOVE this! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Mo - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/16/2018 9:11:00 AM

Thank you Greg xxx mo hugs <3

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/14/2018 1:47:00 PM

Wonderful imagery and feeling in so few words, Maureen. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/14/2018 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Sandra! I'm very pleased with this piece, over the moon with its showing Brian's contest :) Blessings friend xomo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/10/2018 8:14:00 AM

Great imagery!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/10/2018 8:22:00 AM

Thank you Richard :) xomo!

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/9/2018 10:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful monoku cleverly written. Brilliant actually!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 11:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan! I'm not always sure if I'm dipping in the cheese or the whiz ;) xomo!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/9/2018 6:42:00 PM

I love the image your monoku evokes.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 10:23:00 PM

Thank you Agnes :) xomo

Yazmin Malik

Date: 4/9/2018 2:46:00 PM

Lost for words!! This is amazingly beautiful!!! <3. My first Fave!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 10:22:00 PM

And the lost for words is contagious! Wow. Thank you so much Yazmin! xomo :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/8/2018 10:38:00 PM

Beautifully put, Maureen, and in one line, too. Viv x

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 7:13:00 AM

Thank you Viv, I am prone to short poem lol ;) xomo!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/8/2018 2:40:00 PM

Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 7:12:00 AM

Thank you Sara! A lovely day to you :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2018 12:33:00 PM

This is a fascinating look at YOU. I take it that you are a bird lover!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 7:11:00 AM

Tee hee, you may have noticed a common theme ;) xomo!

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/8/2018 11:28:00 AM

Stunningly beautiful, dear Mo! Love, Happy Jack XOXOX

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 7:10:00 AM

Thank you my dear! <3

Becca Teagan

Date: 4/8/2018 9:51:00 AM

Pure beauty!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 7:09:00 AM

Thank you :)

Anna Hopper

Date: 4/8/2018 9:21:00 AM

Love

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/9/2018 7:08:00 AM

Hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/8/2018 7:54:00 AM

Wow. Spectacular imagery. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your winning poem, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/8/2018 8:04:00 AM

<3 <3 <3 !

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/8/2018 6:30:00 AM

Beautiful Maureen. A drum as a full orchestra and rhapsody. Many wishes and happy sound, Kai

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/8/2018 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Kai:) xomo!

Barry Stebbings

Date: 4/8/2018 5:34:00 AM

Beautifully done, Maureen. Layers of meaning. // Barry

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/8/2018 7:45:00 AM

Thank you Barry! :) xomo!

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/7/2018 11:06:00 PM

Superbly done Mo... I love it! Hugs :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/8/2018 7:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Akkina! :) xomo!

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/7/2018 10:28:00 PM

Ohh Maureen, I love your title and your monoku.. Gorgeous sentiments! Two hearts beat as one, my lovely friend, as I share your love for birds as well.. Hugs and love <3

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/8/2018 7:42:00 AM

Thank you Susan! I was a lil obsessed there for a while, at one point 17 pet birds, down to four now, three doves and a finch :) peace and love my bird of a feather! xomo <3