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My Drum

dancing to the beat of wings     my heart a boundless aviary










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birdintrospectionmonoku

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Gregory Richard Barden

April 16, 2018 at 12:56 AM

LOVE this! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Mo - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 16, 2018 at 9:11 AM

Thank you Greg xxx mo hugs <3

Sandra Haight

April 14, 2018 at 1:47 PM

Wonderful imagery and feeling in so few words, Maureen. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 14, 2018 at 2:57 PM

Thank you Sandra! I'm very pleased with this piece, over the moon with its showing Brian's contest :) Blessings friend xomo

Richard Lamoureux

April 10, 2018 at 8:14 AM

Great imagery!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 10, 2018 at 8:22 AM

Thank you Richard :) xomo!

Susan Gentry

April 9, 2018 at 10:56 PM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful monoku cleverly written. Brilliant actually!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 9, 2018 at 11:18 PM

Thank you so much Susan! I'm not always sure if I'm dipping in the cheese or the whiz ;) xomo!

Agnes Krampe

April 9, 2018 at 6:42 PM

I love the image your monoku evokes.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 9, 2018 at 10:23 PM

Thank you Agnes :) xomo

Yazmin Malik

April 9, 2018 at 2:46 PM

Lost for words!! This is amazingly beautiful!!! <3. My first Fave!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 9, 2018 at 10:22 PM

And the lost for words is contagious! Wow. Thank you so much Yazmin! xomo :)

Viv Wigley

April 8, 2018 at 10:38 PM

Beautifully put, Maureen, and in one line, too. Viv x

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 9, 2018 at 7:13 AM

Thank you Viv, I am prone to short poem lol ;) xomo!

Sara Kendrick

April 8, 2018 at 2:40 PM

Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 9, 2018 at 7:12 AM

Thank you Sara! A lovely day to you :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

April 8, 2018 at 12:33 PM

This is a fascinating look at YOU. I take it that you are a bird lover!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 9, 2018 at 7:11 AM

Tee hee, you may have noticed a common theme ;) xomo!

Jack Ellison

April 8, 2018 at 11:28 AM

Stunningly beautiful, dear Mo! Love, Happy Jack XOXOX

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 9, 2018 at 7:10 AM

Thank you my dear! <3

Becca Teagan

April 8, 2018 at 9:51 AM

Pure beauty!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 9, 2018 at 7:09 AM

Thank you :)

Anna Hopper

April 8, 2018 at 9:21 AM

Love

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 9, 2018 at 7:08 AM

Hugs

Line Gauthier

April 8, 2018 at 7:54 AM

Wow. Spectacular imagery. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your winning poem, Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 8, 2018 at 8:04 AM

<3 <3 <3 !

Kai Michael Neumann

April 8, 2018 at 6:30 AM

Beautiful Maureen. A drum as a full orchestra and rhapsody. Many wishes and happy sound, Kai

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 8, 2018 at 7:47 AM

Thank you Kai:) xomo!

Barry Stebbings

April 8, 2018 at 5:34 AM

Beautifully done, Maureen. Layers of meaning. // Barry

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 8, 2018 at 7:45 AM

Thank you Barry! :) xomo!

Akkina Downing

April 7, 2018 at 11:06 PM

Superbly done Mo... I love it! Hugs :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 8, 2018 at 7:43 AM

Thank you so much Akkina! :) xomo!

Susan Ashley

April 7, 2018 at 10:28 PM

Ohh Maureen, I love your title and your monoku.. Gorgeous sentiments! Two hearts beat as one, my lovely friend, as I share your love for birds as well.. Hugs and love <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 8, 2018 at 7:42 AM

Thank you Susan! I was a lil obsessed there for a while, at one point 17 pet birds, down to four now, three doves and a finch :) peace and love my bird of a feather! xomo <3