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'my Dress Is a Cloud of Red'

I savor silence and my solitary dreams, my wanderings and in my candlelit room, I withdraw to my secret place and you I have put on our wedding dance music and I am travelling back, back in time with a sigh I know what comes next and I want to weep with love my dress is a cloud of red chiffon flowing, flowing and you my darling, are in a black suit soft the jazz music drifting in my meditation did I put that music on or did it just come to me you whisper in my ear, I love you, and I turn the page back, back, I turn back the pages we swirl onto the dance floor, twirling and dipping perfectly and the red chiffon is beauty kiss me my darling your whisper or is that the music your strong arms hold me tightly, oh I remember and we are spinning, spinning, spinning then the music is loud like thunder, roaring and you are fading our hands slipping then our fingertips and still we are spinning until you are gone and I am alone yet the music goes on and on and in my candlelit room, I take a deep breath . . . __________________________________ February 5, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/ 'my dress is a cloud of red' Copyright Protected, ID 16 1150-242-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Your Choice 2 Brian Strand First place

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Date: 6/9/2019 3:24:00 AM
Constance I could have never written this wonderful poem under a pseudonym. I would have wanted full credit! A poem that could win many contests. Congratulations my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 6/9/2019 11:58:00 AM
Caren, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, I like to keep my writings private, for now anyways ~
Date: 6/8/2019 7:28:00 PM
Your poem is truly breathtaking in its deep and faceted emotion, Dear Heart. Your brilliant talent is on full display with this poignant yet enchanting piece. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/9/2019 11:58:00 AM
Susan, thank you for the wonderful comment and the congratulations !
Date: 6/6/2019 2:12:00 PM
I knew this glorious, poignant write would be at the top, as that is the only place it should be Constance. It is so utterly beautiful and brought tears to my eyes! Thank you so much Constance you are the most amazing poet! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Constance La France
Date: 6/7/2019 8:28:00 AM
Ann, thank you for that amazing comment about my poem, I was so happy with my placement in the contest ~
Date: 6/6/2019 11:25:00 AM
I remember this beauty Constance, but I don't see my comment so maybe this is a revised or repost version. At any rate it is so deserving of your First Place honor. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 6/7/2019 8:29:00 AM
Connie, this is a repost of the original for this contest, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~
Date: 6/6/2019 7:14:00 AM
The ending lines that show the reversal of a happy scene are so poignant. Touching.!!!! If this is your personal experience, I heartily wish you solace. Hugs <3
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Constance La France
Date: 6/6/2019 8:30:00 AM
Sweltha, thanks for the lovely comment, oh yes, this is my reality ~

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