Premiere Contest WinnerMy Dress Is a Cloud of Red


I savor silence and my solitary dreams, my wanderings
and in my candlelit room, I withdraw 
to my secret place and you
I have put on our wedding dance music
and I am travelling back, back in time with a sigh
I know what comes next and I want to weep with love
my dress is a cloud of red chiffon flowing, flowing
and you my darling, are in a black suit
soft the jazz music drifting in my meditation
did I put that music on or did it just come to me
you whisper in my ear, I love you, and I turn the page
back, back, I turn back the pages
we swirl onto the dance floor, twirling and dipping perfectly
and the red chiffon is beauty 
kiss me my darling your whisper or is that the music
your strong arms hold me tightly, oh I remember
and we are spinning, spinning, spinning
then the music is loud like thunder, roaring
  and you are fading
      our hands slipping
          then our fingertips
              and still we are spinning
                 until you are gone and I am alone
                            yet the music goes on and on

and in my candlelit room, I take a deep breath . . .

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February 5,  2016


Poetry/Free Verse/my dress is a cloud of red
Copyright Protected, ID 16-1109-825-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, 2019 Marathon, Mile 14
sponsor, Mark Toney

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Inman Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 10:31 AM
Hauntingly beautiful.
La France Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 12:46 PM
James, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment, I love this poem a lot and so proud it got first place _Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 6:24 PM
Hello Dear Heart, I think you had a beautiful dream of the time of happiness with your husband. Slowly you awoke and he was gone. Have a nice evening my friend.
La France Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:45 PM
Thank you so much Darlene ~
Inman Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 7:20 PM
Beautiful imagery and touching sentiment BW.
La France Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:45 PM
James, thanks for the beautiful ~
Hyde Avatar
February 27, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Pleasing to both the ear and the eye. Beautiful and wistful. Nice job.
La France Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 10:46 PM
Thank you so much Kim ~
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 9:19 PM
Bravo, Constance. Awesome poem. I love the imagery, the emotion, the form of your poem, the intensity, and how you wrapped it up. Congrats on your very well deserved gold medal.
La France Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Line, thanks for the awesome and the congrats ~
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 12:28 AM
I see why this fantastic poem won First Place Constance! Emotive to the point of causing tears. Congratulations! xxoo
La France Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Connie, thanks for visiting with the fantastic and tears and congratulations ~
Godwin Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 11:15 PM
Beautiful poem - I had to catch my breathe at the end. This one shall stay with me for awhile - WOW! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
La France Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:35 PM
CayCay, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and hugs ~
Haight Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 7:09 PM
Constance, such a beautifully-sad, deeply heartfelt, loving remembrances, expressed with amazing imagery in words and form. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win in the marathon contest. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:37 PM
Sandra, thanks for visiting with the lovely comment and the congrats ~
Awtry Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 1:11 PM
Dear Heart, this is hypnotically beautiful! Well done! Congratulations on your trophy win!
La France Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:37 PM
PS, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and congratulations ~
Toney Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Constance, I know this has special meaning for you and I appreciate your sharing it with us. Your choice of words, the imagery, the music... You have taken us right back there with you, and by doing so we take that deep breath with you! You even made the words look like they're dancing! A Fav for me :) Congratulations on your first-place win on mile 15 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
La France Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Mark, thanks for the contest and my awesome placement and your kind words, yes it is very meaningful to me ~
Devonshire Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 6:25 AM
Your images dance gently through the reader's mind, Dear Heart. So vivid! Excellent writing in free verse form. Those memories come filled with emotions. Hugs, Carolyn
La France Avatar
February 19, 2019 at 3:39 PM
Carolyn, thanks for visiting my poem with that nice comment, appreciate ~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Love the shape and imagery!
La France Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 5:55 PM
Kim, thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment ~
Y. Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 2:36 PM
WoW! BW, This is sooo beautiful and romantic. Good content and imagery! Well done:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 5:56 PM
Alexis, thanks so much for the lovely comment ~
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