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My Dress Is a Cloud of Red Premiere Contest Winner

I savor silence and my solitary dreams, my wanderings and in my candlelit room, I withdraw to my secret place and you I have put on our wedding dance music and I am travelling back, back in time with a sigh I know what comes next and I want to weep with love my dress is a cloud of red chiffon flowing, flowing and you my darling, are in a black suit soft the jazz music drifting in my meditation did I put that music on or did it just come to me you whisper in my ear, I love you, and I turn the page back, back, I turn back the pages we swirl onto the dance floor, twirling and dipping perfectly and the red chiffon is beauty kiss me my darling your whisper or is that the music your strong arms hold me tightly, oh I remember and we are spinning, spinning, spinning then the music is loud like thunder, roaring and you are fading our hands slipping then our fingertips and still we are spinning until you are gone and I am alone yet the music goes on and on and in my candlelit room, I take a deep breath . . . __________________________________ February 5, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/my dress is a cloud of red Copyright Protected, ID 16-1109-825-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, 2019 Marathon, Mile 14 sponsor, Mark Toney First Place

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Date: 4/2/2020 10:31:00 AM
Hauntingly beautiful.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/2/2020 12:46:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment, I love this poem a lot and so proud it got first place _Constance
Date: 3/4/2019 6:24:00 PM
Hello Dear Heart, I think you had a beautiful dream of the time of happiness with your husband. Slowly you awoke and he was gone. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene ~
Date: 3/2/2019 7:20:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and touching sentiment BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/31/2019 10:45:00 PM
James, thanks for the beautiful ~
Date: 2/27/2019 4:01:00 PM
Pleasing to both the ear and the eye. Beautiful and wistful. Nice job.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/31/2019 10:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim ~
Date: 2/19/2019 2:01:00 PM
This is beautiful! Wistfully sad. Congrats on your big win.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2019 3:33:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for visiting my poem with the beautiful and congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 2/11/2019 9:19:00 PM
Bravo, Constance. Awesome poem. I love the imagery, the emotion, the form of your poem, the intensity, and how you wrapped it up. Congrats on your very well deserved gold medal.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2019 3:34:00 PM
Line, thanks for the awesome and the congrats ~
Date: 2/3/2019 12:28:00 AM
I see why this fantastic poem won First Place Constance! Emotive to the point of causing tears. Congratulations! xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2019 3:34:00 PM
Connie, thanks for visiting with the fantastic and tears and congratulations ~
Date: 2/2/2019 11:15:00 PM
Beautiful poem - I had to catch my breathe at the end. This one shall stay with me for awhile - WOW! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2019 3:35:00 PM
CayCay, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and hugs ~
Date: 2/2/2019 7:09:00 PM
Constance, such a beautifully-sad, deeply heartfelt, loving remembrances, expressed with amazing imagery in words and form. Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win in the marathon contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2019 3:37:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for visiting with the lovely comment and the congrats ~
Date: 2/2/2019 1:11:00 PM
Dear Heart, this is hypnotically beautiful! Well done! Congratulations on your trophy win!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2019 3:37:00 PM
PS, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and congratulations ~
Date: 2/1/2019 6:57:00 PM
Constance, I know this has special meaning for you and I appreciate your sharing it with us. Your choice of words, the imagery, the music... You have taken us right back there with you, and by doing so we take that deep breath with you! You even made the words look like they're dancing! A Fav for me :) Congratulations on your first-place win on mile 15 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2019 3:38:00 PM
Mark, thanks for the contest and my awesome placement and your kind words, yes it is very meaningful to me ~
Date: 2/1/2019 6:25:00 AM
Your images dance gently through the reader's mind, Dear Heart. So vivid! Excellent writing in free verse form. Those memories come filled with emotions. Hugs, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2019 3:39:00 PM
Carolyn, thanks for visiting my poem with that nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 1/31/2019 4:48:00 PM
Love the shape and imagery!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2019 5:55:00 PM
Kim, thanks for visiting my poem and the compliment ~
Date: 1/31/2019 2:36:00 PM
WoW! BW, This is sooo beautiful and romantic. Good content and imagery! Well done:-) Alexis
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Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2019 5:56:00 PM
Alexis, thanks so much for the lovely comment ~

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