My Dreams Can Be So Amazing

My dreams can be so amazing

Written By Dean Masciarelli

Thursday, February 18, 2010


My dreams can be so amazing

One moment I can be slip sliding

down a rainbow while its raining

And then free falling into the ocean

Where I find myself surf boarding 
without a surf board on top of dolphins

And in the next moment I am on an island

Where I am on top of an elephant 

Elephant back riding and drinking 
rain water out of banana
leaves while the rain is still falling

But even dreams will come to an ending

I just hope that I can have this dream again 

Because a dream like this one 
doesn’t happen that often

But when they do they sure are amazing
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Brown Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:30 PM
Thank you for sharing your dream poetry today Dean. I enjoyed reading it. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Mclaughlin Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 12:19 AM
I know what it's like to enjoy one's dreams, i have vivid and amazing dreams, too, so I really enjoyed this one.
Palli Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 11:55 PM
nice dreams are fun
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