My Dreamland
I saw a weird dream
A dream within a dream
Full of roses and lilies
There was a garden
And a distant waterfall
Complete with a crimson sky
Made my dreamland breath-taking
Pigeons were in galore
Little rabbits scurried about here and there
Yet in this world
Beautiful with all kinds of magnificence
It's the devil who spoils the deal
And my dream was no exception
There was a cruel giant
He destroyed the garden of eternity
And hence proved a point
He was the ruler of my dreamland
My sleep concluded
The line separating my dreamland
And this substantial world
Seemed way too thin!
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