My Dream within a Dream

 

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“As Awareness increases, the concept of dreams dissipate, and All of Life becomes a dream” Poet 
 
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My dream floats, held IN Divine’s Dream 
         Father-Mother-God’s mocha cream
a raw drum dance somersaulting 
      Sun air water earth, Aloneness ~
                            litanies of lamentation 
 loved and loveless across Life, Free 
   touching altars, embracing be
      seaweed slippery frothing curls
            gliding, re-surfacing, whorls 


emerging then dissipating 
panther’s eye concealed between legs
            secret lucid invisible 
 it spirals, cusping fresh dreams
 letters, messages, sigils, plans
          all is Presence, deep intentions 
                 forsaken, saved, rebirthing 
             lace torn as tapestries worn
    firefly fluttering on stone 


I finger my illusive dream
riding Chamuel’s translucent wings
                    singing sonnets unseen swirling 
 smoky blue diamond freshly mined
blood dripping from thorn morn 
                it escapes Sky into Oneness 
                     landing upon receiving palms



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Date: 9/24/2025 7:31:00 PM
You have a way about you. At least, that's how I attempt to describe your writing. Some amazing imagery "embracing be seaweed slippery frothing curls" " firefly fluttering on stone" dream upon"palms" your quote too, so much depth <3 Hugs!!!
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 9/24/2025 8:08:00 PM
I’m happy I found you here, Paige. You understand my writing. I sense though it is time for me to leave the Soup. Have a beautiful night/day.
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