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09/23/25

My Dream Within A Dream

Third Place

Contest By Constance La France

My Dream Within A Dream

    My Dream within a dream streaming
    on foams of creamy passion 
    in frolic fervent fervour 
    may touch the desired goal 
   or may just evaporate.
   Yet we can't help to survive 
   drinking dreamy desires.

    My dream within a dream rippling,
    propagating dancing 
    ceaseless in ebb and tide,
    sometimes shameful, need to hide !
    sometimes sweet, soothing inspiring ,
   again some may push me 
   to abyss of despondency.

    Yet my Desirable Dream 
    is dream of ambition
    based on idealism 
    formulated by truth, 
    honesty and devotion
    along with righteousness.
    My Dream within a dream 
     of positivity 
     floats free till my last breathe.
    I am truthful to my dream
    in delighted desired dream.
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October 2, 2025 at 3:47 AM
Anisha, congratulations on your win in my Dream Within A Dream contest, judged 09/29. Your poem is well done, Constance
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October 1, 2025 at 8:31 AM
Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Sara K
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