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My Dream Within a Dream

The dream stays with her when she wakes
from a contented sleep,
the eye of new day promises~
          love and joy with laughter anew,
          like flowers blooming in roadside
          gardens across the bridge
          to where she longs to be

away from darkness that shadows
and hides her dream of soaring
          above the firmament,
          above the elements,
          above the hopelessness that keeps
her snared like an old woman
biding until the curtain drops
to hide the stage and stop

her dream within a dream~
yesterday was full of lessons,
tomorrow is a vague unease
of unknown drama coming near,
          today it is enough to wake
          from a contended sleep
          and see the eye of promise,
and flowers blooming in roadside
gardens across the bridge
to where she longs to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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La France Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 3:46 AM
Chetta, congratulations on your win in my Dream Within A Dream contest, judged 09/29. Your poem is wonderful and I like the image, Constance
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 8:30 AM
Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 2:08 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a pretty picture you have here... Good Luck... We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..............
Achara Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 3:37 PM
Thank you. I love contests because they challenge me. Good luck to you too.
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