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My Dream Date

My dream date would have to be romantic.
I’m thinking of a long cruise out to sea
with stop-overs at beautiful locations
and with a man with eyes for only me.

My dream date would have to be in summer
so we could lie in leisure in the sun,
sand beneath our feet and playing handsies.
Then on the cruise ship having lots of fun.

My dream date will just remain a dream.
How romantic can my old man get?
He would never set foot on a cruise ship.
Has time travel been invented yet?

Feb. 5, 2023
For Anoucheka Gangabissoon's My Dream Date Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/21/2023 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. A cruise sounds very romantic. Never say never, one day just maybe he will go. Have a blessed day.........................
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Date: 2/21/2023 2:39:00 AM
Love it! A great dream date. God bless you sweet friend and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 2/9/2023 7:40:00 AM
Sounds fun to me! As to time travel ... we call it dreams. We can go anywhere we want, even if they aren't real ... or are they? Dream on! Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 2/8/2023 2:18:00 AM
Oh my dear dreamy romantic sister. Maybe one day, I never thought my husband would like a cruise, now I can't get him to stop booking them.
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Date: 2/7/2023 7:06:00 PM
Nice, Andrea. Our dreams of romance are a never-ending call.
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Date: 2/6/2023 8:45:00 PM
You made me smile with your last stanza ! How innocently candid and open. Your sense of humor, I greatly appreciate... Andrea. We poets are free to undertake 'time travel'. So cheer up.
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Date: 2/6/2023 8:19:00 PM
Lol you had me till the end lol. Love this one Andrea a favorite xoxo
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Date: 2/6/2023 6:08:00 PM
The good thing is you can always travel in your dreams, Thanks for rating my test a 10, hugs
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Date: 2/6/2023 3:58:00 PM
Oh Dear, Andrea, i was with you all the way, till the third stanza, then you just sounded like my wife. But i do love this, the twist the sense of humour is brilliant. Harry
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Date: 2/6/2023 3:47:00 PM
Andrea, this is awesome! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 2/6/2023 2:50:00 PM
Great humor and desire… sand beneath our feet and playing handsies…a fun one!
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Date: 2/6/2023 2:15:00 PM
No, I don't think time travel is available as of today. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page and taking time to comment. Sara
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Date: 2/6/2023 1:43:00 PM
Hey good one Andrea.. Best wishes for a win Here.'
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Date: 2/6/2023 2:03:00 AM
Loved it, Andrea. No hope of time travel. Oh the fun of it if it were managed. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/5/2023 7:00:00 PM
Oh, how romantic. I want your dream too :)
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