Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

My Dream Date

My dream date would have to be romantic.
I’m thinking of a long cruise out to sea
with stop-overs at beautiful locations
and with a man with eyes for only me.

My dream date would have to be in summer
so we could lie in leisure in the sun,
sand beneath our feet and playing handsies.
Then on the cruise ship having lots of fun.

My dream date will just remain a dream.
How romantic can my old man get?
He would never set foot on a cruise ship.
Has time travel been invented yet?

Feb. 5, 2023
For Anoucheka Gangabissoon's My Dream Date Poetry Contest

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Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2023 at 12:37 PM Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. A cruise sounds very romantic. Never say never, one day just maybe he will go. Have a blessed day.........................

Regina Mcintosh February 21, 2023 at 2:39 AM Love it! A great dream date. God bless you sweet friend and Congrats. Love, Gina

Bill Baker February 9, 2023 at 7:40 AM Sounds fun to me! As to time travel ... we call it dreams. We can go anywhere we want, even if they aren't real ... or are they? Dream on! Have a great week! Bill

Jennifer Walker February 8, 2023 at 2:18 AM Oh my dear dreamy romantic sister. Maybe one day, I never thought my husband would like a cruise, now I can't get him to stop booking them.

Mike Bayles February 7, 2023 at 7:06 PM Nice, Andrea. Our dreams of romance are a never-ending call.

Valsa George February 6, 2023 at 8:45 PM You made me smile with your last stanza ! How innocently candid and open. Your sense of humor, I greatly appreciate... Andrea. We poets are free to undertake 'time travel'. So cheer up.

Michael Tor February 6, 2023 at 8:19 PM Lol you had me till the end lol. Love this one Andrea a favorite xoxo

Joseph May February 6, 2023 at 6:08 PM The good thing is you can always travel in your dreams, Thanks for rating my test a 10, hugs

Harry Horsman February 6, 2023 at 3:58 PM Oh Dear, Andrea, i was with you all the way, till the third stanza, then you just sounded like my wife. But i do love this, the twist the sense of humour is brilliant. Harry

Edward Ibeh February 6, 2023 at 3:47 PM Andrea, this is awesome! Good luck in the contest!

Kim Rodrigues February 6, 2023 at 2:50 PM Great humor and desire… sand beneath our feet and playing handsies…a fun one!

Sara Kendrick February 6, 2023 at 2:15 PM No, I don't think time travel is available as of today. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page and taking time to comment. Sara

Joe Maverick February 6, 2023 at 1:43 PM Hey good one Andrea.. Best wishes for a win Here.'

Victor Buhagiar February 6, 2023 at 2:03 AM Loved it, Andrea. No hope of time travel. Oh the fun of it if it were managed. Best for a win.

Fin Chuuk February 5, 2023 at 7:00 PM Oh, how romantic. I want your dream too :)