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My Dream Date

Did I ever tell you that ... a magical evening ~ never slipped away from my thoughts! in front of a mighty waterfalls,  an undeniable witness of our bond,  raining uninterrupted...rain and the falls... flooded, drenched both of us, never witnessed pouring rain the way I did... my heart never pulsated the way it did..,  a ruby-crowned kinglet crooned inside me,   heart leapt and almost burst with  a sensation of craziest happiness,  rapt with profound sadness.. of the anticipation of losing you.  The image and the feelings come back repeatedly, as if in a fantasy! wish I return to the same spot, where the falls descend like a cascade of love, find you still waiting for me, My miraculous dream date!  February 5, 2023 For "My Dream Date" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon SECOND PLACE

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Date: 2/23/2023 6:36:00 PM
Beautiful, I love romantic poems!
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Date: 2/21/2023 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day.........................
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Date: 2/20/2023 6:35:00 AM
He sounds undeniably dreamy does your dream date, never lose hope - my husband and I were going out together for about a year in or our early twenties, somehow we drifted apart, both got married to someone else, each had a son, and both of us got divorced, and guess what, 25 years later Elias phoned and asked me out on a date, neither of us involved and still madly in love, we got married 6 months later. No harm in hoping! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/12/2023 2:59:00 PM
Beautiful flow to this scene; well done.
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Date: 2/5/2023 6:51:00 AM
- It sounds like a beautiful dream ... best wishes in the contest, Mala :) - hugs
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