My Dream Date

Did I ever tell you that ...
                    a magical evening ~ never slipped away
                                    from my thoughts!
                             in front of a mighty waterfalls, 
                         an undeniable witness of our bond, 
                      raining uninterrupted...rain and the falls...
                               flooded, drenched both of us, 

                       never witnessed pouring rain the way I did...
                         my heart never pulsated the way it did.., 
                        a ruby-crowned kinglet crooned inside me,  
                              heart leapt and almost burst with 
                              a sensation of craziest happiness, 
                                  rapt with profound sadness.. 
                             of the anticipation of losing you. 

                          The image and the feelings come back 
                                repeatedly, as if in a fantasy!
                                wish I return to the same spot, 
                       where the falls descend like a cascade of love, 
                                  find you still waiting for me, 
                                  My miraculous dream date! 


                                        February 5, 2023
                          For "My Dream Date" Poetry Contest
                            Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
                                          SECOND PLACE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Nuwas Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Beautiful, I love romantic poems!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 12:27 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day.........................
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 6:35 AM
He sounds undeniably dreamy does your dream date, never lose hope - my husband and I were going out together for about a year in or our early twenties, somehow we drifted apart, both got married to someone else, each had a son, and both of us got divorced, and guess what, 25 years later Elias phoned and asked me out on a date, neither of us involved and still madly in love, we got married 6 months later. No harm in hoping! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 2:59 PM
Beautiful flow to this scene; well done.
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 6:51 AM
- It sounds like a beautiful dream ... best wishes in the contest, Mala :) - hugs
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