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My Dream Come True

My Dream Come True Cherry blossom candy kisses Soft Saphire shining moon Diamond twinkling starlight Wrapped in loves sweet cocoon Nature's humming lullaby Gently rocking me to sleep moon beams watch protecting safe and sound my soul does keep Moments i will always cherish Are moments spent with you You bring a sweetness to my life Thoughts filled with honeydew Bringing colors into my world Exciting my sights as my taste With tangerines and blueberries Shows my time won't go to waste So sprinkle me with strawberries Pour on some sweet cream too Add some succulent peaches know your my dream come true Contest:STRAND SELECT 2 any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor:Brian Strand

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L. J. Carber

Date: 1/6/2020 9:20:00 AM

Congrats Brenda-- so evocative I had a sudden craving for some fruit! That last stanza is kinda hot.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/6/2020 11:25:00 AM

Hahaha! Just kinda hot? Lol!Yea does make ya think of fruit huh!;) lol thank you so much!;)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/3/2020 4:54:00 PM

So sweet I can almost taste it. Congrats!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/3/2020 6:46:00 PM

Haha thank you Juliet that was what I wanted!;)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/3/2020 12:14:00 PM

Hi Brenda, Congratulations on your placement. Love the way you wove the sweet taste of fruit with the sweetness of love.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/3/2020 6:45:00 PM

Thank you so much Sam!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/4/2019 10:49:00 AM

Flawless! All the images blend perfectly, and the rhyme and the flow are Heavenly! An instant FAVE for me...By the way, Nature abhors a vacuum, they say: And with this poem, you have stepped into the breach left by Chris Green's exit. I rank this right up there with the best of his. No false flattery here. This poem is that good! You can really take pride in it, my friend. Best wishes, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/4/2019 11:34:00 AM

Gershon thank you so very much! I take that as a very high compliment! Yes we all miss Chris but one never knows he may be back!;) Until then we'll I don't think I could possibly take his place nor would I even try! Thanks once again lol!;)

John Fleming

Date: 7/2/2019 8:24:00 PM

Truly delectable...simply dripping with lavishness -- beautifully penned!! One can actually taste the words, Brenda. A lovely little piece of poetry. In great affection. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/3/2019 1:22:00 PM

Thank you John so very much! I always love your comments! You always bring a smile to my face! ;) All my affection

John Hamilton

Date: 6/28/2019 9:02:00 PM

This is special sweet writing reminds me of now don't be offended...Chris Green miss him but now I read you!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/29/2019 1:14:00 AM

Hahaha! John I would not take offense to that at all! I happen to love his poetry! I could only dream of writing as beautiful as he does! Haha! And you see I thought the same thing when I had written it! That is a huge compliment indeed!;) So thank you so very much! And I do miss him too!;)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/28/2019 1:40:00 PM

i love the happy feel-good vibes which this poem transmits, Brenda. Sounds like love is in the air :) ~ Warm regards // paul

Brenda Chiri
Date: 6/28/2019 4:06:00 PM

Lol thank you Paul! Just in love with life right now is all and enjoying how much I enjoy it! Lol!;)