Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

My Dream Come True

My Dream Come True

Cherry blossom candy kisses
Soft Saphire shining moon
Diamond twinkling starlight
Wrapped in loves sweet cocoon 

Nature's humming lullaby
Gently rocking me to sleep
moon beams watch protecting
safe and sound my soul does keep

Moments i will always cherish
Are moments spent with you
You bring a sweetness to my life
Thoughts filled with honeydew

Bringing colors into my world
Exciting my sights as my taste
With tangerines and blueberries
Shows my time won't go to waste

So sprinkle me with strawberries 
Pour on some sweet cream too
Add some succulent peaches
know your my dream come true

Contest:STRAND SELECT 2 any form,any theme Poetry Contest
Sponsor:Brian Strand

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L. J. Carber January 6, 2020 at 9:20 AM Congrats Brenda-- so evocative I had a sudden craving for some fruit! That last stanza is kinda hot. Brenda Chiri January 6, 2020 at 11:25 AM Hahaha! Just kinda hot? Lol!Yea does make ya think of fruit huh!;) lol thank you so much!;)

Juliet Ligon January 3, 2020 at 4:54 PM So sweet I can almost taste it. Congrats! Brenda Chiri January 3, 2020 at 6:46 PM Haha thank you Juliet that was what I wanted!;)

Sam Kauffman January 3, 2020 at 12:14 PM Hi Brenda, Congratulations on your placement. Love the way you wove the sweet taste of fruit with the sweetness of love. Brenda Chiri January 3, 2020 at 6:45 PM Thank you so much Sam!;)

Gershon Wolf July 4, 2019 at 10:49 AM Flawless! All the images blend perfectly, and the rhyme and the flow are Heavenly! An instant FAVE for me...By the way, Nature abhors a vacuum, they say: And with this poem, you have stepped into the breach left by Chris Green's exit. I rank this right up there with the best of his. No false flattery here. This poem is that good! You can really take pride in it, my friend. Best wishes, Gershon Brenda Chiri July 4, 2019 at 11:34 AM Gershon thank you so very much! I take that as a very high compliment! Yes we all miss Chris but one never knows he may be back!;) Until then we'll I don't think I could possibly take his place nor would I even try! Thanks once again lol!;)

John Fleming July 2, 2019 at 8:24 PM Truly delectable...simply dripping with lavishness -- beautifully penned!! One can actually taste the words, Brenda. A lovely little piece of poetry. In great affection. :) john Brenda Chiri July 3, 2019 at 1:22 PM Thank you John so very much! I always love your comments! You always bring a smile to my face! ;) All my affection

John Hamilton June 28, 2019 at 9:02 PM This is special sweet writing reminds me of now don't be offended...Chris Green miss him but now I read you! Brenda Chiri June 29, 2019 at 1:14 AM Hahaha! John I would not take offense to that at all! I happen to love his poetry! I could only dream of writing as beautiful as he does! Haha! And you see I thought the same thing when I had written it! That is a huge compliment indeed!;) So thank you so very much! And I do miss him too!;)

Paul Callus June 28, 2019 at 1:40 PM i love the happy feel-good vibes which this poem transmits, Brenda. Sounds like love is in the air :) ~ Warm regards // paul Brenda Chiri June 28, 2019 at 4:06 PM Lol thank you Paul! Just in love with life right now is all and enjoying how much I enjoy it! Lol!;)