My Dream

one night i had a dream,i dreamed i has was i in a meadow, not knowing of this place it was 
so very beautiful. as i was dreaming ,i was wondering through the meadow, i came apond a 
stream. i stop to rest rest i lookeinto the stream, what i saw was, a very hurting man , i did 
not know who he was.as i was looking at the reflection in the stream, i heard a soft voice 
with love . it siad that is you my child.i replied, it couldn't be me.there was a soft hand that 
touch the stream,and reflection of my past i was seeing.i asked why are you showing me this 
pain?my child you are hurting,this i see.i hurt the one i love so dearly, i can't foregive my 
self for that now.i began to cry as i so what i have done.the voice said i have foregave you, 
but you mst forefive yourself, now.love takes time to heal it's wonds on seen.as i was 
dreaming i felt a hand with so much love i had awaken, i knew then it was the lord telling me 
it's going to be alright.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/19/2009 6:33:00 AM
Thanks for shareing this. Sometimes it is very hard to forgive ourselves. We all make mistakes in life. Forgivness is the key to joy. Forgiving others and forgiving ourselves leave us free to love. Nice job on your poem. Keep writing. God Bless you and welcome to Poetry soup. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/14/2009 3:10:00 PM
Great work Jeremy and welcome to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul
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Date: 4/14/2009 8:15:00 AM
A great vision ... old mean will dream their dreams, and young men have their visions, but only a genius can report them. High regards.
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