My Dream--Part 2

I had a vision--it came in a dream,
An angel stood before me with snow,white wings,
He took my hand and said,"Come with me"-
"I'll show you where you want to be".

And then we were standing on a sandy shore--
I said,"What is this place, have I been here before?"
" In your dreams-there is a man who calls your name,
  but you are afraid-you won't light your flame." 

"You wanted to go to him, for his love is pure--
And in your heart you know he has the cure
For  he's the one who can set your heart free,
And take you in dreams where you want to be."

"The next time he comes, go with him,"
The angel vanished, and all seemed to dim--
As I returned to my dream to wait for him, 
And the next time he calls, I'll run with him.
                                                             The End.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 7/30/2008 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Patricia. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2008 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations on having this very heart warming poem featured this week. Superb. Love Heidie
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Date: 7/28/2008 11:28:00 AM
You have wonder ideas and paint a beautiful picture, but it reads rather choppy in places as though you are stumbling. Your rhyme scheme and rhythm need some work.
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Date: 7/28/2008 7:42:00 AM
Beautiful dream, Patricia. Congratulations on having it featured. Vince
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:28:00 AM
Congrats on having your dream of a poem featured this week
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Date: 7/28/2008 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations Patricia on your beautiful poem being featured this week. I wouldn't mind having a dream like that. So comforting to me. Love, Shar
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