My Dog Walking Me

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This is an actual experience I have almost every day walking my dog.
I'm sure others have had the same. But we love these little critters,
don't we?
 My Dog Walking Me

Out of the door, turn left, then cross
I'll lead us on, cause I'm the boss.

Let me see, it looks as though...
over down this way, oh you must know
it's just beyond the short plateau.

Hey,quit moving like a swivel chair
don't you see, it's quite unfair
you've twisted the leash to a sudden stop...
and made me do a belly flop!

Listen up don't push, don't pull. 
Remember when I made the rule?
So take it easy not fast not slow. 
Straight, quick right, then forward, Go!

Yes, I see that pug nose clout 
coming close to check me out.
But just for now some quick short smell
In places that we dogs can tell
You'd rather not talk about   

O.K. let's go, no time to shmooze
Its them or me, you must now choose
Cause there are places to explore 
The trees and grass are right next door
and lots of spots I've smelled before.

It's time to stop, ahh that feels fine.
There'll be lots more, on down the line.

I love all this roaming round,
and look at all the stuff I've found.
The weekend's gone the parks new spaces
are full of many special places. 

And as I waddle and roam around 
I sense the earlier festive sound

...has all I like to see, hear and smell.
I think its great, oh, can't you tell?

I'm happy but it's time to go
back home to snooze, relax -although;
perhaps tomorrow, I'll not complain,
I get to do it all again.

CAK  6-20-2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/22/2014 9:37:00 AM
A LOVELY piece! I've written one like this once... tho mine had me chasing after cars, and squirrels, and eventually up a tree...
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Date: 6/9/2014 5:26:00 AM
Fabulous fun poem, A hit with dog lovers, and now you can me too. Another doggie nut.
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Date: 5/22/2014 9:34:00 PM
I truly get this poem, I too have doggies. :) I really appreciate the fun and freedom in it. TFS Jess
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Date: 4/22/2014 8:36:00 PM
hello Allan, a wonderful routine. Fun, but it sounds like something I would not like. Not that I have anything against dog walking. I just don't like my puppy leading me around. LOL... Hey, Allan, I enjoyed this, very much. I trust my dog, to roam, and enjoy nature without me standing behind him. thank you... Linda
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Allan Koven
Date: 4/23/2014 10:41:00 AM
Linda, my dog is still a puppy. He is hyper and wants to smell everything but is the cutest thing.Part Pomeranian and ???. Everybody loves him. You would to. My wife was not a dog lover but he is now her dog. So glad to hear from you again. When will you publish a book of your amazing poems? Allan
Date: 2/20/2014 12:29:00 PM
As a dog lover and parent, I totally identified with this piece. Sammy, our cocker spaniel, is difficult on a leash, but Bilbo, our boxer, aside from pulling me along sometimes, does very well on his leash. Great write, Allan; enjoyed it immensely :)
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Allan Koven
Date: 2/20/2014 5:13:00 PM
Seems we've crossed paths on other poems. Great to hear from you again. Hope you are finding a path on a road that will take you to peace and contentment. Allan
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