My Dog Voices His Opinion

       A tiger cuddling in my lap
         my dog observed
            mouth agape

       I said to my dog
         nail your jaw together
            Beware lest the ground it does scrape

       But instead Fido barked
         and off raced the tiger 
            bounding way beyond the landscape

       My brave barker said to me
         That’s why they say ~
            Getting rid of a tiger’s ‘dog’s play’
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Baker Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 10:09 PM
Priceless wit in your rhyme poem, Gershon. I really do enjoy reading your poetry, my friend. Have a great week! Bill
Godwin Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 10:33 AM
What's so great about you is the ability to deliver wit in no way diminishes your ability to have series conversations. I've known some who lean on sarcasm, wit, flippancy, etc. emotionally. It is not your go to but your can do. I enjoyed this very much. Love, CayCay
Wolf Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:45 PM
I'm gonna get a swelled head if I keep reading your comments, my dear... May even break a world record. Thank you so much for your kid words. ~ Gershon
Bayles Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:57 PM
Nice rhyme. Nice humor.
Wolf Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 8:25 PM
Yor comments are always valued, Mike. Thank you so much for visiting my site. Excelsior, Gershon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:16 PM
I appreciate the humor...needed it today. The last line got me! thanks for always sharing your humorous wit. enjoy the week ahead, Sara
Wolf Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 8:29 PM
Glad to provide a bit of humor, Sara. Keep smiling now, Gershon
Velasco Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 11:36 PM
Haha, this gave me a good chuckle! I love how Fido totally owned the moment—talk about canine confidence! That last line? Pure pun perfection.
Wolf Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 8:39 PM
Fido may have a career here as a punster poodle. Thanks, Rowena
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