My Distant Horizon Glowing

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Clouds, Heaven, Boat, Sea, Water Waves, Faith

The day will come one day when my soul departs, one day I will be old and frail; my beauty will be withered pale, perhaps I will be reading braille ! My days will be a mix of real and imaginary parts, I will recall my childhood joy; my favorite pretty doll toy, and my crush on a cute schoolboy ! The day will come one day when my soul departs, one day I will not hold a pen; and I will never write again, but I will always have my Zen ! My days will be a mix of real and imaginary parts, I wish my end is like floating; on a boat in the sea drifting, with my distant horizon glowing ! _______________________ April 18, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/My Distant Horizon Glowing Copyright Protected, ID 04-1449-598-18 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Anything You Want sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 04/23/2022 Second Place

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/26/2022 8:04:00 AM

Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Love It. You are a wonderful writer. I hope you will write forever. Today, be blessed with your win...........

Constance La France
Date: 4/26/2022 8:39:00 AM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, I will write till I cannot hold a pen, then I will write in my mind, blessings ~Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/23/2022 8:56:00 AM

A masterpiece on death and new life. Makes me undergo mix feelings. "one day I will not hold a pen; and I will never write again" - God! That day should never come. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 4/23/2022 12:45:00 PM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, the day will come as we cannot hold back time, so live for today always dear friend ~Constance

Len Gasun

Date: 4/23/2022 7:29:00 AM

Your poem beautifully portrays your vision and wishes my dear friend Constance. But I pray that you'll not be reading braille. Congratulations on your great win and superb write! Thanks for sharing and God bless you always! Hugs

Constance La France
Date: 4/23/2022 8:31:00 AM

Len, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, appreciate, hugs ~Constance

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/20/2022 9:55:00 AM

Hi Constance - This entry can stand on its own and I found it very poetic in language voice and tone. This would be a beautiful and peaceful way for one and all the this moment and time arrives. It was an honor turning to your page today. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful day. Best wishes with the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 4/20/2022 1:19:00 PM

Lisa, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment on my poem and my writing, it means a lot to me ~Constance