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Clouds, Heaven, Boat, Sea, Water Waves, Faith

My Distant Horizon Glowing

 
The day will come one day when my soul departs, 
        one day I will be old and frail;
                 my beauty will be withered pale,
                          perhaps I will be reading braille !

My days will be a mix of real and imaginary parts,
         I will recall my childhood joy;
                 my favorite pretty doll toy,
                          and my crush on a cute schoolboy !

The day will come one day when my soul departs,
         one day I will not hold a pen;
                  and I will never write again,
                          but I will always have my Zen !

My days will be a mix of real and imaginary parts,
        I wish my end is like floating;
                on a boat in the sea drifting,
                        with my distant horizon glowing !

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April 18, 2022


Poetry/Rhyme/My Distant Horizon Glowing
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1449-598-18
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Written for the Premier contest, Anything You Want
sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke, Judged 04/23/2022

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 8:04 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Love It. You are a wonderful writer. I hope you will write forever. Today, be blessed with your win...........
La France Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 8:39 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, I will write till I cannot hold a pen, then I will write in my mind, blessings ~Constance
Alex Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 8:56 AM
A masterpiece on death and new life. Makes me undergo mix feelings. "one day I will not hold a pen; and I will never write again" - God! That day should never come. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 12:45 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, the day will come as we cannot hold back time, so live for today always dear friend ~Constance
Gasun Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 7:29 AM
Your poem beautifully portrays your vision and wishes my dear friend Constance. But I pray that you'll not be reading braille. Congratulations on your great win and superb write! Thanks for sharing and God bless you always! Hugs
La France Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Len, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, appreciate, hugs ~Constance
Ricci Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 9:55 AM
Hi Constance - This entry can stand on its own and I found it very poetic in language voice and tone. This would be a beautiful and peaceful way for one and all the this moment and time arrives. It was an honor turning to your page today. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful day. Best wishes with the contest.
La France Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 1:19 PM
Lisa, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment on my poem and my writing, it means a lot to me ~Constance
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