Elaine George Poet Cinquain

My Destiny - a Traditional Cinquain

.                                                       Daughter
                                                       My miracle
                                                  Separated at birth
                                          I was lost until you found me
                                                         Charlee

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                                                 Written:  May 14, 2011

                              Dedicated to my  beautiful, precious daughter

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James Fraser August 2, 2011 at 4:29 PM Beautiful write to your daughter, it's so lovely. Thank you kindly for reading me Elaine :)

Lee Ramage July 25, 2011 at 10:32 PM Beautiful. Just brings goosebumps when I read this one! Lee

Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2011 at 10:35 PM I had to see this one because it is the same title that I used in my entry for the river contest (an oldie of mine) anyway, this is so beautiful, and I seem to remember you telling me about our daughter in the past. LOVE it.

Black Eyed Susan June 6, 2011 at 8:12 AM A wonderful tribute. It's hard to believe you could sum up such powerful emotions in just a few words, but you did and it's lovely. thank you for sharing this with us.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 17, 2011 at 2:29 PM A lovely dedication and perfect lines to express the luv u have for your precious daughter Lainie.. not only are your poetic words so magnificent my friend but your words of comment are both wise and so very welcome ... they have lifted my spirits soaring to new heights as my intention was ...is .. and shall ever be.. to be a light on PS. and in the World of darkness... thankxx for being a great and special friend always luv..

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2011 at 9:08 PM How wonderful for your daughter. And what a cute name she has, Lainie!

Sara Kendrick May 16, 2011 at 3:12 PM Very touching and loving work..Enjoyed reading this eve..I can't imagine the pain a mother would feel being separated from their child when they are young...Very gracious and loving write...Thanks for the comments on my blog..Our Rocky was 14 1/2 years old..He had an enlarged heart and heart failure...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire May 16, 2011 at 1:25 PM So touching, Lainie. Did this really happen? We often hear of children finding their mothers later in life -- it rings of truth. Wonderful triute to Charlee! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 15, 2011 at 5:20 AM What a fine dedication to a daughter by a mother, Elaine