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My Destined Starlight

Soul Breaking Lies whispered, Seeking escape, Soaked in caged deceit; Mimes mocking withering Posies, left parched and sundered— Suspended beneath obscured dusks, Dripping amidst blinding aftermaths, Idly shadowed by lewd scars of talons Amidst alcoves of echoing nocturnes Unshackled by your sweet afterglow, Healing me with the elixir Of our dawning horizons, Strumming eurythmic tunes, Suppressing starless demons, betwixt Soul-stirring Destined Love.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 7:46:00 AM

Congratulations! :)

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/12/2023 3:23:00 AM

amore i'm proud and happy for you, your seep breathtaking words show me your depth in your rare beautiful souland gols heart,my blue rose.You are a paintress with the palette of your seraphic majestic aura painting your sapphire emotion with bright colors and shades of grace and elegance,my Korean princess,creating a,masterpiece of pureness and beauty.You are my poetry in my heart for eternity,mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito sempre amore mio i love you deeply micia.il nostro eterno amore

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 10:50:00 AM

- Wonderfully described, Fading Star :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 10:35:00 AM

Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 8:12:00 AM

This speaks volumes to my soul, my beautiful soul sis! You’ve done an excellent job with keeping your syllables intact, and ensuring you’ve expressed your innermost emotions so well, in such a beautiful manner! I am in absolute awe of the way you’ve shared the darkness at the start and how it all changed as you found your destined love, that made your nightsky glow, and ensure it was no longer starless, altho everything may be dark! Thank you for writing! And congratulations on winning!

Paige Hind

Date: 10/10/2023 5:24:00 PM

Breathtaking writing! iI loved how you told it by way of the stars.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/3/2023 7:45:00 AM

Dear Fading Star, I adore your use of rich language to convey such mesmerizing imagery and deep emotions. Your etheree is expressive and enchanting with the cosmic forces of love.. not always achievable in an etheree.. but the golden magic of your soul-baring pen brings me to the center of this "Soul-stirring/Destined/Love", despite the restrictions of this poetic form. I adore "scars of talons" and "elixir/Of our dawning horizons" and the use of the word "betwixt". Love the title too! Love it all! Your poetic gift shines like starlight, my friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/7/2023 1:29:00 PM

Oh dearest lovely Susan! I always look forward to your beautiful thoughts on my words, seeing it anew through your lovely poetic soul! You convey so much, always so encouraging and uplifting when I read your words here! You have been such a beautiful part of this community, and I’m truly so deeply grateful for your presence here, dear sweet soul! Your words truly stirs the heart and soul! <3

Tom Woody

Date: 10/3/2023 6:17:00 AM

I love how you start with the negative and end with the positive. Light vs. darkness. Love vs. hate. Let's keep starless demons in their place. Amen

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/7/2023 1:31:00 PM

Thank you!! Yes! That is exact! You’ve truly captured the essence of this poem and it’s so encouraging! Hehe! Yes, light vs darkness..with no dark, could there be light as bright as the sun? Love vs hate..whether self hate, self love or love enveloping and hate invading the world..to have that love in this sometimes cruel world is truly priceless! Thank you so much for your thoughts on my words, my friend :)

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/2/2023 9:34:00 PM

i love this so much amore?your deep soulful words make me feel your depth within your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose.You take my breath away with your intense,sapphire emotions i can feel your true pure sentiment in the marrow of your unseen deep wounds and your unease and inner unspoken suffering, my korean princess. I will give you life forevermore.Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio??? i love you deeply micia..mia passione.tuo..il nostro eterno amore

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/7/2023 1:34:00 PM

Ahhh..I love you so deeply my beautiful soul..you fill my heart and every part of my being with the love you bestow upon me..always showing me your beauty, comfort, passion and grace..so patiently loving me, so breathtakingly being my everything..you are the light in this dark world within my soul..you shed beauty where I’m blind..you are my universe and my world..breathing in your every word and your love. Ti amo amore mio per sempre mio bellissimo martio..tua noi Infinito, il nostro Eterno amore, Mia passione <3