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My Democratic World

"I think of a place Where our soul is pure! I think of a place Where no ones confused for what they do Everyone's damn sure I think of a place Where people don't have problems But if they do -they get it with cures I think of a place Where we rule the place Without a tenure We ourselves give us full assure- For what we do what we see and what we hear Is right and will be true! No unnecessary payment no punishments no sue! This a place which I think of....... I have imagined Now can you?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/28/2013 9:26:00 PM
Congratulations, with your winning poem Zoya, I'm also stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"
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Date: 3/27/2013 5:22:00 PM
Zoya , a nice winning poem, Congrats~SKAT
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Date: 3/24/2013 8:23:00 AM
Zoya, wonderful poem about your appreciation of democracy, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/24/2013 1:38:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on this fantastic poem of yours my dear friend Zoya! I extremely love and enjoyed reading it and the picture you've portrayed is amazing. Thank you so much for your full support in my contest. Have a blessed Palm Sunday/Weekend! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/1/2012 12:01:00 PM
Hi Zoya, I love the ending challenge in this poem. Great leap to questioning our place in society, you caught the flow. Congratulations on your win! :) Sheri
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Zoya Amreen
Date: 11/16/2012 1:54:00 AM
THAN K U
Date: 10/1/2012 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Get it together" contest Zoya. Love, Carol
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Zoya Amreen
Date: 11/16/2012 1:54:00 AM
THNX
Date: 9/29/2012 12:37:00 AM
Zoya, congratulations with your wonderful and well deserved win after expression your thoughts for the ~~India Arie - "Get it together" ~ Contest... It was nice hosting this contest for "Hughes, William" from the soup. Take care~ XOX ~PD
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Zoya Amreen
Date: 11/16/2012 1:55:00 AM
THNK U
Date: 9/26/2012 8:46:00 AM
nice work!
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:11:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Zoya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Zoya Amreen
Date: 9/19/2012 11:31:00 PM
i should actually thank you for showing such generosity and love. i am really glad to see your comment. and i would love to share more with you all. with lots of love , zoya.amreen
Date: 9/17/2012 1:47:00 PM
Welcome to Soup .. great imagination but is there such a place. One Love Annie
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Zoya Amreen
Date: 9/17/2012 11:44:00 PM
i dnt think there is dats y just imagining!!!
Date: 9/17/2012 8:35:00 AM
nicely done zoya - welcome to soup
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Zoya Amreen
Date: 9/17/2012 9:31:00 AM
THNXXXXXXX
Date: 9/17/2012 2:44:00 AM
a fresh poem for fresh people!! thankyou...
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