My Democratic World

"I think of a place
Where our soul is pure!
I think of a place
Where no ones confused for what they do
Everyone's damn sure
I think of a place
Where people don't have problems
But if they do -they get it with cures
I think of a place
Where we rule the place 
Without a tenure
We ourselves give us full assure-
For what we do what we see and what we hear
Is right and will be true!
No unnecessary payment no punishments no sue!
This a place which I think of.......
I have imagined 
Now can you?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 28, 2013 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations, with your winning poem Zoya, I'm also stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"
A  Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 5:22 PM
Zoya , a nice winning poem, Congrats~SKAT
Harper Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 8:23 AM
Zoya, wonderful poem about your appreciation of democracy, congratulations on your win.
Gasun Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 1:38 AM
My hearty congratulations on this fantastic poem of yours my dear friend Zoya! I extremely love and enjoyed reading it and the picture you've portrayed is amazing. Thank you so much for your full support in my contest. Have a blessed Palm Sunday/Weekend! love and hugs, Leonora
Harper Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 12:01 PM
Hi Zoya, I love the ending challenge in this poem. Great leap to questioning our place in society, you caught the flow. Congratulations on your win! :) Sheri
Amreen Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 1:54 AM
THAN K U
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Get it together" contest Zoya. Love, Carol
Amreen Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 1:54 AM
THNX
A   Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 12:37 AM
Zoya, congratulations with your wonderful and well deserved win after expression your thoughts for the ~~India Arie - "Get it together" ~ Contest... It was nice hosting this contest for "Hughes, William" from the soup. Take care~ XOX ~PD
Amreen Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 1:55 AM
THNK U
Shines Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 8:46 AM
nice work!
Brown Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 11:11 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Zoya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Amreen Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 11:31 PM
i should actually thank you for showing such generosity and love. i am really glad to see your comment. and i would love to share more with you all. with lots of love , zoya.amreen
Lander Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 1:47 PM
Welcome to Soup .. great imagination but is there such a place. One Love Annie
Amreen Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 11:44 PM
i dnt think there is dats y just imagining!!!
Roske Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 8:35 AM
nicely done zoya - welcome to soup
Amreen Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 9:31 AM
THNXXXXXXX
Amreen Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 2:44 AM
a fresh poem for fresh people!! thankyou...
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