My Definition of Love

I inhale your existence 
I can feel you without touch
Somehow that is strange to me
Collide into red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 9:34 PM
This is a reasonably well written dodoitsu. You have chosen a good selection of words to include here.
Loving Iii Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 5:21 PM
knowing feelings. jhl
A  Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 9:15 PM
NICE MEANING *LUV ~SKAT
Austin Avatar
February 3, 2011 at 10:04 AM
Exotic reaction. Must be ifatuation. Like this one mucho. Daver
Mehta Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 6:15 PM
very spiritual type of definition of love, kristen. enjoyed the write
Sweetheart Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 5:52 AM
Excellent entry Kristen.. and good luck with this definitive entry luv..
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 12:11 AM
Just adore those first two lines! Cool collision on the end too! I bet this scores high!!
Wilson Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 11:53 PM
Really like the way this reads...love,Deb
Onclaud Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 11:04 PM
how charming and enrgetic, kristen... like tour last line! winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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