My Deer

Wish to be like the trees;
Only to feel the breeze
And to taste the dewdrops on my leaves.
Wish to see the sky over me
And to feel that there is nothing out of reach
Wish to feel the waves of the sea
Hitting me on the beach.
To my surprise, when woods I pass
I saw a deer running from the mass,
I hate the scene of the hunter coming,
I hate to see her running and running.
But the bravery appeared
When-with her antlers-she beard
But my legs couldn't stand
Watching her bleed on land.
I thought it is done
That she will never see the sun.
A fantasy I ruminate!
She stood again and I meditate.
She was wounded I can deem
But- with her agile body- she redeem'd
Then..I wish my heart was the deer
That could be hurt but without blear
That could be wounded but stand on his knees,
And never fall apart because any of these
I wish my heart was brave;
To face his scars with faith.
Then my deer will be strong
To  brood fears all day long.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sweeny Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Amazing!!
Karim Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 1:09 PM
I like the title of your poem My Deer. My mom loves deer! Good write!
Tadros Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 1:39 PM
Thank you :) I love them too :')
A   Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 12:10 PM
This is deep, and I feel the comparison to nature. Enjoyed. LINDA
Tadros Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 3:25 PM
Thank you for your encouraging words.
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