My Deepest Prayer

O, Chief Spirit,
thank you for the harvest
that fills our granaries
to the brim.

Thank you for the blue sky
that fills our souls with dreams
and beauty.

Thank you for the waters
that replenish us ceaselessly.

Thank you for the rain that brings
life to our crops.

Thank you for the snow that makes our children
leave happy footprints with their moccasins.

Thank you for our parents, brothers, sisters,
strangers, and most importantly,
our ancestors.

Thank you, Chief Spirit,
for remembering us throughout
our existence.....


Date of Entry: 8/17/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Walker Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Teddy, a lovely tribute to our Lord. Congratulations on your placement within the contest on prayer. Enjoy your weekend. ~ Sonia
Kimathi Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 6:04 AM
Hi Sonia. Thank you so much for your warm, kind applause!! *^_^* Enjoy your weekend too!!
Warrior Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 10:43 PM
Congrats!!! Teddy on placing my friend...well deserved...god bless...^WW^
Kimathi Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 4:07 AM
Thank you so much ^WW^, for your kind applause!! :-) God bless you too!!
Scars Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Teddy, beautiful prayer...congrats on your well deserved top placement :)-luloo
Kimathi Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 7:48 PM
Lol. Sorry Laura, my comment jumped. Thank you so much for your warm applause!! *^_^*
Kimathi Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Welcome, Eve. Thank you for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Roper Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Thank you so very much for such an inspiring prayer, Teddy. Hugs Eve
Kimathi Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 7:49 PM
Welcome, Eve. Thank you for enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 3:48 PM
I love prayers of gratitude, and this is wonderful.
Kimathi Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 3:31 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea!! *^_^*
Onclaud Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 12:41 PM
what an uplifting sigh of gratitude beautifully done, teddy... blessings and huggs
Kimathi Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Thanks for your kind comment, Nette!! *^_^* Blessings to you too!! ;-)
Turner Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 12:06 PM
A most worthy prayer, Teddy.
Kimathi Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel!! :-)
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