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If I should die, dress me in purple satin On my neck a string of pearls fasten Lay upon me roses red A weeping tear shed Oh, this I Dread Cannot lie Life is a thread The end of it, I do dread Promise, I will not be forgotten If I should die, dress me in purple satin _____________________ June 22, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/Andaree/My "deathly'' Fear Copyright Protected, ID 16-803-432-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, A Poem That You Enjoyed sponsor, Lewis Raynes, Honorable Mention _______________________________________ Written for the contest, Your Worst Fear sponsor, Laura Loo, First Place

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Date: 9/17/2016 11:38:00 PM
Loved ur thought here Constance, congratulations in ur win
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Date: 7/13/2016 8:11:00 AM
Simply beautiful - a new favorite. Congrats on your win in the Your Worst Fear contest. Jesse
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Date: 6/27/2016 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on top win, Constance:) Less words with deeper thoughts:)
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Date: 6/27/2016 1:24:00 AM
Beautifully written poem in the wonderful form created by Andrea, about a universal fear. Actually there are two fears expressed in your poem - Thanatophobia, the fear of death, and Athazagoraphobia, the fear of being forgotten. All the best in the contest, Broken Wings. ~karam~
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Date: 6/27/2016 1:29:00 AM
Oops, I came across your poem randomly. Have just seen that you have been crowned with first place in the contest! My heartiest congratulations on your win, Broken Wings! ~karam~
Date: 6/26/2016 10:21:00 PM
Oh the form and the content, they're both awesome. Congrats on your top win, BW.
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Date: 6/26/2016 7:45:00 PM
Terrific win B/W, congratulations...
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Date: 6/26/2016 12:29:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend with this beautiful poem. Loved always my lovely smiling friend, bl
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Date: 6/25/2016 9:39:00 PM
Congrats Constance on the beautiful thought and the form!
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Date: 6/25/2016 9:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. This is a marvelous poem with a unique form I really like,
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Date: 6/25/2016 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place....your poem is amazing and I like this new form...
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Date: 6/25/2016 6:42:00 PM
Very pretty poem about death. Congratulations, Broken Wings!
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Date: 6/25/2016 6:27:00 PM
wow, you rhymed that center line just right. Amazing I think you have two number one special wins now. I don't think I will ever get one!! Big congrats on this well deserved win. It's so elegant(thanks for the mention of my form, dear one)
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Date: 6/25/2016 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win! Love the purple satin idea :)
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Date: 6/25/2016 5:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win....something we must all face someday.....
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Date: 6/25/2016 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations BW on a rich and moving work. I found the chosen form interesting to this challenge and the imagery proved rich and compelling. The rhyme was smooth and graced your message smooth as purple satin.
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Date: 6/25/2016 3:40:00 PM
oh I do love the Andaree form congrats on your win Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/25/2016 3:27:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your First Place Trophy win for this deep and dark fear of death and end of life poem. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/25/2016 3:25:00 PM
Purple satin? Class! Jusy like this winner.
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Date: 6/25/2016 3:05:00 PM
Beautiful form with a beautiful poem...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest Broken Wings!:)-luloo
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Date: 6/25/2016 9:47:00 AM
I like this a lot BW. A beautiful Andaree with a clever title.
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Date: 6/23/2016 11:44:00 AM
after all the sudden deaths of family members, this one really meant a lot to me, constance... beautifully written... huggs
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Date: 6/23/2016 1:36:00 AM
Love this. I hope you win. Great poem in a style I haven't seen before. A new favorite for me.
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