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My Death Now Or To Come

As the surf hits the rocks below Legend’s Bluff My dreams smash with them, to broken shards Reflecting upon this moment and all moments past My left foot tempts fate by stepping closer to the edge It wasn’t long ago, we both sat here watching the sunset Her eyes reflected the crystal blue of the water Our hearts, together, sounded, pounded, louder than the surf They were happy days then, lost to the forgotten wind now But here I stand with that wind at my back Pushing me into the possibility of eternal regret Continue on or turn away? Questions I alone will know the answer to

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/9/2009 5:53:00 PM
This is a very moving write, Michael. Like Kristen said it is never an easy answer when you are in that moment yet I can't hep bt agree with Sharon's sentiments. Excellent poetry my friend! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/9/2009 3:57:00 PM
A very difficult moment that sadly, I have been on both sides of...never ever an easy answer. well done, love, Kristin
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:50:00 AM
Very well written piece that just captivates the reader - I like how the ending is a profound question that only you can answer, Great poem Michael, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:56:00 AM
Turn away! Always hope for a brighter day. Sorry, got swept away in the moment of the read! Extraordinary writing today! Love, Shar
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