My Dearest Pal Beth

My dear Beth,my oldest friend,you've been there through it all
In light and darkness,watched me rise and caught me in my fall
We often laugh and speak of old adventures we recall
Sometimes deep discussions of the past can make us bawl
There's such a love between us,we will never build a wall!





**for contest"Golden Gratitude"
sponsored by Adeleke Adeite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 12:07 AM
This is so nice and isn't it geat to have friends like this? Congratulations!
Adeite Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 11:49 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest dearest friend, I am sorry it took me this long to congratulate you. Please accept my warm congrats and please keep your passionate painting poetry pages with creative colors. I wish you all the best with your writings dearest Deb. Love, Adeleke
Mehta Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Deb
Poet Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 10:50 AM
I like it Deb!Congrats on your win!--kashinath
Laan Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 8:27 AM
wonderful Deb, well done:))
Freeman Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 8:04 AM
Wonderful to see you at the top Deb with this worthy poem's fourth place win. Congratulations on your honored placement. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 7:01 AM
You and Beth are blessed to share such a friendship, Deb. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in the "Golden Gratitude" contest sponsored by Adeleke Adeite. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 5:33 AM
Congrats Deb on your big win in the Golden Gratitude contest ..wonderful words my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Pettit Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:33 PM
Adeleke should like this entry in her contest. As usual, you have great wording and rhyming.
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