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My Dearest Pal Beth

My dear Beth,my oldest friend,you've been there through it all In light and darkness,watched me rise and caught me in my fall We often laugh and speak of old adventures we recall Sometimes deep discussions of the past can make us bawl There's such a love between us,we will never build a wall! **for contest"Golden Gratitude" sponsored by Adeleke Adeite

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/18/2011 12:07:00 AM
This is so nice and isn't it geat to have friends like this? Congratulations!
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Date: 3/17/2011 11:49:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest dearest friend, I am sorry it took me this long to congratulate you. Please accept my warm congrats and please keep your passionate painting poetry pages with creative colors. I wish you all the best with your writings dearest Deb. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 3/17/2011 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 3/17/2011 10:50:00 AM
I like it Deb!Congrats on your win!--kashinath
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Date: 3/17/2011 8:27:00 AM
wonderful Deb, well done:))
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Date: 3/17/2011 8:04:00 AM
Wonderful to see you at the top Deb with this worthy poem's fourth place win. Congratulations on your honored placement. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/17/2011 7:01:00 AM
You and Beth are blessed to share such a friendship, Deb. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2011 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in the "Golden Gratitude" contest sponsored by Adeleke Adeite. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2011 5:33:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your big win in the Golden Gratitude contest ..wonderful words my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:33:00 PM
Adeleke should like this entry in her contest. As usual, you have great wording and rhyming.
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