My Dear Rose

My dear beautiful Rose 
the sky becomes darker on this cold night . 
The world becomes grey but you shine ever so bright .
Beauty in its purest form, as the shadows crept into my life I became my darkness ... A demon was born, 
Tho to you there was no evil in sight ;
You gave up a few of your petals to help me through the storm . In the end on that dark cold night,
You let me pick you from the dirt, 
killing you softly just so I could see the light .
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Gifford Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 4:24 PM
Hello Anthony, a bit sad but an amazingly beautiful write. Enjoy your day.
Lindley Avatar
April 10, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Dark which is one of my favorites. Your closing perfect. Have read Poe? If not , I would advise doing so- as with your talent and poetic leanings Poe would be a great poet to read, enjoy and study. I myself, did just that 50 years ago and highly recommend it.. A fav... God bless...
Bookram Avatar
April 11, 2020 at 9:43 PM
Haha that's my favorite type, yes I've read many of Poe's work , thank you I appreciate the comment along with the advice.
Roper Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 11:00 PM
Nicely done free verse , Anthony. enjoyed the beautiful imagery.
Bookram Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Thank you so much , I really appreciate it. :)
Bookram Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Let me know what you think
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