My Dear Rose

My dear beautiful Rose 
the sky becomes darker on this cold night . 
The world becomes grey but you shine ever so bright .
Beauty in its purest form, as the shadows crept into my life I became my darkness ... A demon was born, 
Tho to you there was no evil in sight ;
You gave up a few of your petals to help me through the storm . In the end on that dark cold night,
You let me pick you from the dirt, 
killing you softly just so I could see the light .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/10/2020 9:47:00 AM
Dark which is one of my favorites. Your closing perfect. Have read Poe? If not , I would advise doing so- as with your talent and poetic leanings Poe would be a great poet to read, enjoy and study. I myself, did just that 50 years ago and highly recommend it.. A fav... God bless...
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Anthony Bookram
Date: 4/11/2020 9:43:00 PM
Haha that's my favorite type, yes I've read many of Poe's work , thank you I appreciate the comment along with the advice.
Date: 3/16/2020 11:00:00 PM
Nicely done free verse , Anthony. enjoyed the beautiful imagery.
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Anthony Bookram
Date: 3/17/2020 12:59:00 PM
Thank you so much , I really appreciate it. :)
Date: 3/16/2020 6:38:00 PM
Let me know what you think
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