My Day

With my pen in hand 
I write of the morning sun
As the dew sparkles.
Sitting on the porch  
On an early afternoon
Watching as blue birds
fly away into 
the night sky as  I go rest
my head for the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 26, 2011 at 11:12 PM
a very well done poem,..p.d.
Onclaud Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 4:23 PM
such attention to details.. i am beguiled, cory by the flow and pacing of this one moment in a time..:) huggs, nette
La France Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Very nice Cory, yes it has a soothing quality to it, that I love and thanks for your ever support of me and my poetry~~
Gorelick Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Very, very nice..soothing. BG
Benson Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 6:41 PM
A lovely time. Good write, enjoyed the read.
Johnson Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 6:22 PM
Simply a beautiful day. Peace be with you, on your way. In all the weeks and years to come. May God's soft rain meter your drum.
Brown Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 3:36 PM
Enjoyed reading your very interesting poetry today Cory. Love, Carol
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