My Darling Jon

MY DARLING JON
  
               I look at you with joy,
     just like when you were a little boy.
         You made my birthday better,
              the best birthday ever.

         It started with a birthday kiss,
          four minutes after midnight.
      Hours later, you brought breakfast,
    followed by lunch, although I was out.
 
              I got back and ate lunch
                    and My! Oh! My!
              a strawberry short cake.
                   Oh, what a feast!
.
                It did not end there.
     As I went out and partied in the night,
   you gave the birthday card the next day.
              To my total surprised!!!

          It included an acrostic poem.
       As I read it, I was overwhelmed
 with happiness for your knack for words,
       just like your Mom and here it is,
                   as you wrote it…….

      Marvelous soul indeed
      Awe-inspiring to others
      Ravishing beauty with style
      Imaginative, inventive, insightful
      Loving to family and friends
      Entertaining dancer and singer
      Notable in gatherings
      Encouraging the world with creative
        empowering poetry 

          I am so proud of you son.
  I may not always show you; but I am.  
   I am so awestricken how you see me
and I am so amazed by you and your poem.

      Thank you. Thank you, Jonathan,
                  my darling Jon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/11/2020 2:08:00 PM
It looks like the poetic apple doesn't fall from the the tree! Your appreciation in this tribute to Jon is so touching. Thank you for sharing.
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Marilene Evans
Date: 10/11/2020 2:37:00 PM
Thanks, Sam. I guess, I owe three more... for my two daughters and my older son. Having kids is a lot of work and a lot of love.
Date: 10/11/2020 1:30:00 PM
My son is complete opposite of yours. I do not even get a birthday card. You are very appreciative Stay that way. You are a lucky mother!!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 10/11/2020 2:35:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I'm still drunk with glee and still celebrating my birthday. My younger daughter drove from Northern California and brought dinner for my birthday and we went out and partied. I'm heading to my older daughter in a couple of hours for she has a party for me.
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