My Daily Balm

i love the taste of the moon... tangerine, compared to the metal taste of the blistering noontime temperature. and to inhale the embroidery of evening, to me, is to be filled with soothing solace. as one can see ...sneaking outside, in the din of hours, to speak with her, my moon--- round or sliced and concave--- has been a passage and ritual of mine since I was a girl child. and to chase this orb and know if she is waxing or waning with my thirsty eyes, i cling to her symphonies and silence it is so, till I snuff out from this earthscape if you see a butterfly maiden, strolling the lines of a porch or street in slit hours sometime before twilight... it is simply me, once more, inhaling my moon tasting this delicacy... this luna of beauty i need as my daily passion and balm; lest i die
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Nair Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 9:39 AM
Nette, balmy days i suppose... great poem and deserving win, big congrats!!
Mehta Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 6:27 AM
Wonderful poem, your favorite one. Congrats on the win, nette
Jones Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 9:40 PM
Sleep well, my sistah, right on, write on! <3
Puddifoot Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 6:22 PM
an impressive and beautiful poem from you, nette, I love how that 'and' leads the reader straight into the poem...there are so many lovely phrases in this, such as "the embroidery of evening" - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Guzzi Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 5:18 PM
really really good! choice, of course you have so many dreamy verses! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
K. Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 6:20 AM
ooh belated congrats on this beauty nette! not clicking on names right now, so had to look froa winner from you-- not hard to do since you are raking them in, girly-- yay for you! & haha loko mo naman ako--- haven't read your tank entry yet-- syempre may hands-- may hawak syang bola eh ;) heehee & you & me both alas kwatro din ako natulog kaninang umaga-- ano ba tayo???? ahahhaha! hugs :)
George   Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 4:22 AM
Ah!!!! a gril of my own heart, Nette. This paints such mystical beauty. It is going to my list of favorites. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 8:54 AM
Lovely Poem Nette, worthy of all honor among the best. Congratulation on your success. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:21 PM
ahhh the Moon! Great write lights! whoopie a sweet one too!
Fahey Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 4:13 PM
So Beautiful, Nette! Congrats on your win!! Ellen
Brown Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Drake's contest Nette. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 10:02 AM
wonderful piece nette, congrats on your win
Devonshire Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Soo happy to see you in the winners' circle, Nette. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Mannan Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 7:35 AM
Wow Such awesome images Nette. Many heartiest congrats for this super win.
Mehta Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Drake, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:06 AM
Super congrats Nette my dear friend on your HM in Drake's cool contest with this vibrant entry and elegant write luv.. enjoy another very special honor u have accrued for your fantastic poetry luv..
Tacito Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 5:05 AM
A truly mind-blowing imagery trip. This was so excellently done.
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 12:23 AM
wow, nette,I have found the poem of yours which for me sings with lucidity AND with gorgeous imagery combined. this is a FAVE for me. LUv, Andrea
Villarosa Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 6:28 PM
enchanting words and I like your deep thoughts for each stanza's passage, very creative write as always, I enjoyed reading this morning and appreciate your kind comment to my poem. take care kabayan pala kita, I thought you are a foreigner, nice name, have a blessed day. (^_^) Noel.
K. Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:38 AM
I really enjoyed reading this one, Nette! I liked how you presented the moon as your "daily bread"-- beautiful imagery and this one I could relate in a way since there are times that I just can't take my eyes off the moon, too-- way to go for this & best wishes in the contest! hugs :)
Adeite Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 9:22 PM
Wow, great use of imagery, love the cluster of creative colors used in this, I mean your wide use of words. You're such a gem nette, thanks for your kind comments & love. They are most appreciated. Thanks for sharing this. Keep your priceless poetry pen dancing to the darling drumbeat of your heart . Great you. Love, Adeleke
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 7:03 PM
Eloquent poem. Vince
Sweetheart Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 3:13 PM
A treasure chest of beauty and loveliness combined with fantastic imagery and ultra intense lines Nette my friend.. good luck in the contest by Drake.. super awesome...
Beck Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:03 AM
....or email your stuff to me at [email protected]@gmail.com................regards...Syd
Devonshire Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Sweetie, I couldn't live without enjoying the outdoors either. Nature has so much beauty! You did a beautiful job describing your love for the plants and the moon. Best wishes in Drake's contest! Love, Carolyn
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