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My Daddy

"If I had One Wish" contest Just one more day to sit with my Daddy, a conversation with always a laugh. Hours on the couch with long talks and coffee, a memory I see clear and miss much. by Michael J Falotico

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/8/2011 12:06:00 PM

Wow... My heart sliced as I read this poem. Especially the last line, ...a memory I see clear and miss much.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 6/11/2011 12:29:00 PM

Such a beautiful memory Michael.Really enjoyed but should've been ranked higher but congrats on this piece.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Jack Horne

Date: 6/3/2011 11:48:00 AM

Many congrats on your very beautiful win, Michael : )

Kash Poet

Date: 6/3/2011 6:31:00 AM

A wonderful Wish...Congrats Michael on your win...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/3/2011 5:18:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of kristen, Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2011 5:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Michael. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2011 9:15:00 PM

Congrats Michael on your HM in the wish contest luv with this touching write .. feeling it luv.. enjoy special honor for special words.. W.K. ..J.G. in beach mode still till Sunday luv..

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 6/2/2011 7:07:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS!!!! thumbs for you and for your work.... ****jun-jun

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/2/2011 6:39:00 PM

What a loving heartfelt wish, Michael. We will always miss them. Love, joyce

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/2/2011 6:26:00 PM

Looks like the silohette of you and your dad sittin and having a cup of coffee. You are a sentimental fellow, Michael. I wish the same as you here---one more day to sit and chat with my very honorable dad! BTW..his name was Michael too! Bless u and your big sentimental heart. Gwendolen

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/29/2011 6:36:00 AM

this brought a tear to eye mike very compasionate write and read much enjoyed my memories of my dad are full of sad memories due to being abused but over time he got less angry before god took him away at 55 hope you print this out and put on a plaque also thanks for your kindest comment to my write for brians contest and gl in this one

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/28/2011 11:32:00 AM

A beautiful write Michael somehow the memories tend to bring comfort and other times we miss them too much.. Hope you find comfort in the memories you have of your daddy.. Love ya WN

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/27/2011 8:56:00 PM

oh I miss my Daddy too Michael and no one can ever take their precious place in our lives.. very touching and yes I luv this form so much.. feeling your emotion luv.. hope u are enjoying a happy and safe holiday weekend.. my W.K. ..your Jersey Girl is seashore mode luv..oh wow..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2011 5:13:00 PM

I love the way you showed this form, the formatting of it! This is an awesome wish. Wish it could come true for you!

Date: 5/27/2011 4:42:00 PM

Michael, a very touching write, in honor of your father I'm sure he heard your words and is very proud. Love Alexa

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/27/2011 3:09:00 PM

A memory I hold close to my heart and miss a great deal... Honor and be grateful for every minute you have with a family member, because we never know how tomorrow is written... luv Michael