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My Dad

Jackie My father was a farmer’s boy who loved to work the land, but many children came to him and wages weren’t grand. So he went to be a miner and toil beneath the ground to feed and clothe his family, to keep us safe and sound. He’d tell us of his younger life and often he would share the stories of his farming days wishing he was there. Though he couldn’t sing for tuppence he did so anyhow the songs he knew were myriad I still can hear him now. I’ve missed him since he passed away but know he’s out of harm and, if God agreed to his last wish, he’s somewhere on a farm. His idea of Heaven was living on a farm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/14/2011 1:06:00 AM
A great tribute to your father here.Love it.May I request you to read'Lurking teardrops' from my 4th page.Ps:You need not have to comment in all those poems as that will be time consuming...just read .
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:59:00 AM
He sounds a wise man Margaret.Where did he farm in your beautiful homeland?Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:25:00 AM
This is just great, Margaret. Is it for the contest? My grandpa was a farmer and loved it too! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/3/2010 2:18:00 PM
This is a very moving tribute to your father, Margaret. The reader can sense his dedication to his children, especially since he left farming behind to toil in mines because he wanted to provide a better life for his family. Indeed, he's probably raising a holy crop of the finest quality in heaven now! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/2/2010 9:38:00 PM
How very nice, and touching, Margaret. Loved this write! What a nice tribute to your father. Loved the very last line. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 5/2/2010 7:57:00 PM
This was fun to read, and I'm sure he's farming to his hearts content. And, I'm sure he approves of your writtings. RAY
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