My Dad

Jackie

My father was a farmer’s boy
who loved to work the land,
but many children came to him
and wages weren’t grand.
So he went to be a miner
and toil beneath the ground
to feed and clothe his family,
to keep us safe and sound.
He’d tell us of his younger life
and often he would share
the stories of his farming days
wishing he was there.
Though he couldn’t sing for tuppence
he did so anyhow
the songs he knew were myriad
I still can hear him now.
I’ve missed him since he passed away
but know he’s out of harm
and, if God agreed to his last wish,
he’s somewhere on a farm.



His idea of Heaven was living on a farm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/14/2011 1:06:00 AM
A great tribute to your father here.Love it.May I request you to read'Lurking teardrops' from my 4th page.Ps:You need not have to comment in all those poems as that will be time consuming...just read .
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:59:00 AM
He sounds a wise man Margaret.Where did he farm in your beautiful homeland?Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:25:00 AM
This is just great, Margaret. Is it for the contest? My grandpa was a farmer and loved it too! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/3/2010 2:18:00 PM
This is a very moving tribute to your father, Margaret. The reader can sense his dedication to his children, especially since he left farming behind to toil in mines because he wanted to provide a better life for his family. Indeed, he's probably raising a holy crop of the finest quality in heaven now! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/2/2010 9:38:00 PM
How very nice, and touching, Margaret. Loved this write! What a nice tribute to your father. Loved the very last line. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 5/2/2010 7:57:00 PM
This was fun to read, and I'm sure he's farming to his hearts content. And, I'm sure he approves of your writtings. RAY
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