My Cyber Family

My Cyber family





I had no one to speak my heart,
Depression had stolen my spark,

Could not help emotions flow,
Glittering eyes had lost their glow,

One fine evening of early sunset,
I doomed in Ocean of deep regret,

Penned my feelings at poetry soup,
Was welcomed by a warm group,

Washed away in tears was grief,
Cyber family touched me deep,

My feelings as I penned to post,
Within no time came hugs of support,

Critical comments gave me a go,
brainy ones blew away the sorrow,

Contests kept me occupied,
Negative thoughts were put aside,

Exquisite pens mesmerise, age no bar,
Put you to cloud nine and ride the stars,

If you too are sad and crazy,
Welcome to my cyber family !





Written July 21st, 2015
For contest by Mystic Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Johnson Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Good luck in the contest with this laudatory poem about your cyber family. Nicely done. And thank you for reading and commenting on an old poem of mine. It was a surprise to see it again. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Enjoyed reading your very well written contest entry. Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:17 AM
Thnx Sara!
La France Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Upma, your write says it all, the soup keeps on giving, a place where we can reveal our pain and our souls, an exquisite 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, glances . .
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:16 AM
Thnx BW
Gifford Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 6:24 AM
I liked your poem for the contest. How true we are a family here to support and uplift each other. Best of luck in the contest. A 7. ~~Darlene
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:16 AM
Thnx Darlene!
Smith Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 3:44 PM
I remember those same feelings...a feeling of belonging
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:16 AM
Thnx Tim!
Gasun Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Wow! This is so great my dear friend, Dr. Upma. A mutual feeling here! Thank you so much for sharing and being one of the members of my loving cyber family. This poem goes to my fave, and 7+ from me. More pow'r and blessings! love lots, Leonora
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:15 AM
Thnx Leonora!
Horsman Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Oh such positivity, and one i can truly relate to, wonderful poetry..
A. Sharma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 2:15 AM
thnx harry
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