My Cue To Fall Apart

The journey home seemed endless
People were still smiling
I wondered how and why

My broken heart
Was seeping out of me
Such was the pain I couldn't cry

I occupied myself
To numb out the first few hours
Somehow waiting for my cue

I cleaned the house
Until my hands bled
And bruised black and blue

The stinging seemed to help
I could see this pain
It felt real

Everything else
Was my body going into shock
This I couldn't feel

Still the birds were singing
The sky going about its business
Even today it wouldn't be grey

The world niggled me
Like an excited child
I just wanted it to go away

The wait seemed constant
You know its coming
But not sure when it will start

My heart is broken
And I am just waiting 
For my cue to fall apart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/26/2009 2:28:00 PM
Jo, wonderful verse!!! Like you, I do housework when something is bothering me. I hate to think of you suffering and waiting for your "cue to fall apart." But that's what good poetry does. It makes the reader feel! Thanks for commenting on "I See Tomorrow in You." And please don't envy my writing style; yours is so unique and creative! Best wishes, Carolyn
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