My crush

Deep silence in the park some birds are late to their nest
Shadows covering from bright light from city
Sitting alone in the bench I can see bright stars 
Already exposed in the dark I can hear night songs directly from the park
I can hear some echoes that takes me back
The day I  see something calling and attracting me
And some drums that kick hard within my vessel 
I was dying though am breathing
I was seeing though am dreaming 
I was walking though I was standing still
Then I realized it was too late
Treasure was already possessed 
And i was a buyer without a package 
I feel troubled and disturbed, then I realized
Every car in backyard was new once.
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March 27, 2025 at 2:19 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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