Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

My Crumpled Thoughts

I am tired of making lists for the store,                                                                         I can't even get out the door.                                                                                      Last year is over and so are my thoughts,                                                                        I tied them all in knots.                                                                                                  I am tired of stinky thinking,                                                                                             so maybe I should take up drinking.                                                                              My mind has been working overtime,                                                                               and not on just a new rhyme.                                                                                                        My car got a lube and oil,                                                                                                          My thoughts need some new planting soil.                                                                               Mind toss out the old and bring in the new,                                                                                 I refuse to spend this year blue. 

 

Date Written: 1/8/2021

1/10/2021 Poem of the Day win.

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Janice Canerdy January 11, 2021 at 11:48 AM CONGRATS on getting POTD--well-deserved, Paula! Janice Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2021 at 1:29 PM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day...........

Jennifer Proxenos January 11, 2021 at 3:02 AM Beautiful memories Janice and often a song or a smell can bring those memories to the surface like it was yesterday. Congratulations on POTD, a well deserved honour. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos January 11, 2021 at 12:16 AM What a lovely poem, you are so right my friend we need our "mind to toss out the old and bring in the new" Congratulations my friend on your excellent POTD Hugs and Blessings,Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 9:23 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Yes, "we need our mind to toss out the old and bring in the new." Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day...........

Unseeking Seeker January 10, 2021 at 9:21 PM Congrats on POTD and good luck for the contest! Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 9:21 AM Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your good luck. It is an wonderful honor to have POTD. Have a blessed day..................

Brandy Nicole January 10, 2021 at 8:16 PM "My thoughts, I tied them all in knots" Oh my !! Sounds like you got some untangling to do. This is so cute, clever and creative. Your tied up thoughts bring a smile. Keep writing your amazing poetry, dear Paula. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 9:19 AM Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. It is an wonderful honor to have POTD. I am glad you now have a smile. I like to bring smiles. Have a blessed day..................

Akkina Downing January 10, 2021 at 3:25 PM Nice one Paula, and congratulations on potd Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 9:13 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Have a blessed day...........

Alexis Y. January 10, 2021 at 3:08 PM Hi Paula, This is a great write for the contest theme. I can most definitely relate to it. Best wishes in the contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 9:12 AM Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your best wishes. It is an wonderful honor to have POTD. Have a blessed day..................

Angela Crabtree January 10, 2021 at 1:43 PM Out with the old and in with the new. A great poem and vision for this year. Congratulations on Poem of the Day, Paula. ~Angie Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 9:10 AM Thanks, for writing and for your congratulations. Yes, I am with you, "Out with the old and in with the new." Have a blessed day.................

Eve Roper January 10, 2021 at 1:18 PM Paula, I like your list. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 9:07 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day with a hug...........

John Watt January 10, 2021 at 12:26 PM Paula, I love your vision of making this year entirely different and casting off the habits and mindsets of 2020. Thanks for the encouragement and inspiration, and congrats on your deserving POTD win. Enjoy your day ~ John Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 9:06 AM Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. It is an wonderful honor to have POTD. Glad you like this it. Have a blessed day..................

Connie Marcum Wong January 10, 2021 at 12:21 PM I agree Paula. Our thoughts and vision are very powerful so it is important to be optimistic. Congratulations on your wonderful POTD honor! Blessings xxoo Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 9:03 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this. Yes, we must be optimistic. Have a blessed day...................

Victor Buhagiar January 10, 2021 at 10:56 AM Well done, my friend. An interesting poem worthy of POTD. ~~ Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 8:59 AM Thanks, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. it was fun to write. Have a blessed day..................

L Milton Hankins January 10, 2021 at 9:02 AM Hearty applause for a well-earned POTD! Congratulations! Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 8:57 AM Thanks, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like it. Have a blessed day..................

Melvin D'Lima January 10, 2021 at 8:48 AM This sums up the mind games we have all been playing in 2020.Time for a mindset change in 2020.Congratulations on POTD, Paula. Keep up with writing inspiring rhyme. Melvin Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2021 at 8:56 AM Thank You, for reading for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day..................

Gershon Wolf January 10, 2021 at 7:34 AM That's what I say: Crumple 'em up, tie 'em in a knot, and toss all those higglety-pigglety-wiggly thoughts from 2020! Forward with a blast! Congratulations on POTD, Paula. Many blessings, Gershon Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:40 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this. Yes, yes, toss them all away. I say, smile and write through this mess. Have a blessed day...................

Joseph May January 10, 2021 at 7:13 AM Congrats on POTD Paula Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:27 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. Have a blessed day..................

Anne-Lise Andresen January 10, 2021 at 6:50 AM - No matter how much we hate it ... I think it will be a "blue" year ... - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:26 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is a wonderful honor to have POTD. You may be right about a blue year. I pray not. I say, smile and write through this mess. Have a blessed day with a hug...................

Vijay Pandit January 10, 2021 at 6:31 AM You thoughts illuminate--aptly said Paula. BIG congrats on poem of the day. Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:24 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is a wonderful honor to have POTD. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day..................

Beryl Edmonds January 10, 2021 at 6:30 AM Love the write Paula, congratulations on poem of the day. Let’s hope our days become brighter soon ~ Belle Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:23 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. So glad you love this one. I am with you, come on brighter days. Have a blessed day..................

Regina Mcintosh January 10, 2021 at 6:25 AM Great thoughts. Congrats on POTD Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:21 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. I enjoyed writing it. Have a blessed day..................

Bobby May January 10, 2021 at 5:43 AM This is great Paula, Congratulations on POTD Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:19 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is a wonderful honor to have POTD. Glad you like it. Have a blessed day..................

Evelyn Swartz January 10, 2021 at 5:41 AM Congratulations on POTD. I liked the way you have this formatted on separate sides. Looks nice and you conveyed how bad 2020 was in a lighthearted fashion. Evelyn Swartz Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:18 AM Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. It is a wonderful honor to have POTD. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day..................

Tania Kitchin January 10, 2021 at 4:18 AM Well done Paula, congratulations on POTD! Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:17 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is a wonderful honor to have POTD. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day..................

Anitha Jayasankar January 10, 2021 at 3:35 AM Let's hope and pray for the best this year.... amidst the prevailing difficult situations in many places. Congrats on your POTD Paula... Hugs ~ Ani Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:16 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. It is a wonderful honor to have POTD. I say, smile and write through this mess. Have a blessed day..................

Jenna Logan January 10, 2021 at 2:57 AM Nix the drinking idea, Paula. That will only add to the blue emotions. There's a lot we can all be grateful for, despite world conditions. Congratulations on your potd. Paula Goldsmith January 10, 2021 at 7:15 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It is a wonderful honor to have POTD. The "drinking" was just for the write. I needed a rhyme word. Yes you are right, I am very grateful. I say, smile and write through this mess. Have a blessed day..................

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