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My Cruel Mistake

You love to see me suffer from the pain you inflict. You smile your devilish smile when you raise your hand and see me flinch. When I retreat you just come after. Hitting me with blows as I hear your laughter. When I think you're done you prove me wrong. You pull me into your bed then sing your song. In and out as I scream in pain. In and out as I cry in shame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/21/2011 7:00:00 AM
Two comments: your reader feels your pain, and the your in the ninth line should be you're. Good write.
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Book: Shattered Sighs